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Spring Shower

Trickle of raindrops Tapping out pitter patter Renewing the earth Copyright © 2010 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/2/2012 7:14:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Lena. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:22:00 PM
This is as descriptively well as anyone can write a haiku poem. Great write.
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:07:00 PM
WAy to go, Lena! congratulations. andrea
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Date: 2/3/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Great fun!!
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the Spring contest Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:37:00 PM
Very nice Haiku! Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/2/2010 6:12:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 1/28/2010 5:27:00 PM
Such great wisdom brought forth through your expressive description of the effects of rain. This is one of my favorite Haiku and I thank you for sharing. Mac
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:47:00 AM
Up here in frozen Michigan that tapping of spring raindrops will be welcome. I like this one mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:05:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Lena.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 1/26/2010 10:24:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Lena. Love, Carol
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