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Spring Shower

Trickle of raindrops
Tapping out pitter patter
Renewing the earth

Copyright © 2010   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 2, 2012 at 7:14 AM

I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Lena. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Robert Pettit

February 8, 2011 at 8:22 PM

This is as descriptively well as anyone can write a haiku poem. Great write.

Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2010 at 5:07 PM

WAy to go, Lena! congratulations. andrea

Sue Mason

February 3, 2010 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Great fun!!

Brian Strand

February 3, 2010 at 7:55 AM

Congrats on your success in the Spring contest Lena.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 2, 2010 at 11:37 PM

Very nice Haiku! Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

February 2, 2010 at 6:12 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Mac Mcgovern

January 28, 2010 at 5:27 PM

Such great wisdom brought forth through your expressive description of the effects of rain. This is one of my favorite Haiku and I thank you for sharing. Mac