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Spring Rose

one rose opens up,
a honey bee drinks nectar~ 
quenching its thirst 












Contest: Spring Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
03/27/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 1:51 PM
I know that bee enjoyed the drink. I would not like the honeybee's sting though. Beautiful picture of the rose. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 12:52 PM
What an amazing red rose - and a great haiku written about it and the nectar the bees drink from it, no wonder their honey is bliss to eat on toast or put into a cup of tea. Well penned my friend and best luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Well done, Alexis. I am starting to wonder if I did the contest right because I am seeing several about roses. Were there pictures to go with it? I better go see!!!
Y. Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 9:01 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. I didn't see any pictures of roses; I just wrote about a rose. I appreciate that you stopped by my friend:-)Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 2:35 PM
A pretty one. ;0)
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 11:30 AM
- A beautiful picture with your words, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Very Nice Alexis :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Lovely spring scene Alexis, a sign warmer days are coming. Good luck Tom
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 9:28 PM
This haiku is fresh and beautiful like the season, Alexis. I love it! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Beautifully penned! Sweet visualizations.
Pettit Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 5:04 PM
Another find haiku that reminds me spring is finally here.
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