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Spring will forever be the time for renewals when brisk fresh air invigorates our drowsy muse. Tickling every inner child, beckoning them to come out for a playdate. And ever so gleefully we crack open the treasure chest of possibilities, dust it off to see what gems we can uncover. dawn of fresh beginnings old shoes new paths AP: 2nd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on March 7, 2021 for contest SPRINGTIME HAIBUN sponsored by M.L. KAISER - RANKED 1ST

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David Mohn

Date: 4/8/2021 8:01:00 PM

This is wonderful Line...congratulations

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/8/2021 9:38:00 PM

Thanks, David. Much appreciated ~

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/6/2021 11:49:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2021 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Beata ~

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/6/2021 2:00:00 PM

Line, Brilliant! Old shoes new Path is sheer genius! Congrats on your top win- well deserved!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2021 4:16:00 PM

thank you very much, Krish ~

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/6/2021 1:53:00 PM

Brilliant writing Line, well deserved 1st place, love your haiku, old shoes new paths, speaks volumes, cheers David

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2021 4:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, David ~

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/6/2021 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2021 4:16:00 PM

Much appreciated ~

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/5/2021 6:33:00 PM

So lovely dear Line..The serenity of your thoughts are well-complimented by the stunning picture. would love to paint that before the spring is over! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/5/2021 8:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, JCB ~

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/5/2021 6:05:00 PM

After reading your Haibun, there is no question as to why it was the first place winner. Congrats, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/5/2021 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jenna ~

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/20/2021 12:25:00 PM

A lovely verse of spring, with lots of insight. Touches on the familiar.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2021 9:05:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 1:45:00 PM

This enthusiastically brings spring into my step today!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 5:59:00 PM

Thanks, Caren ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2021 4:03:00 AM

I like this one especially the Haiku. Reads like winning material to me. Way to go. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated ~

Makoto Ogino

Date: 3/8/2021 2:55:00 AM

Thank you for sharing us nice Haibun! I like it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thank you very much, Makoto.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/7/2021 5:08:00 PM

Love it: 'old shoes, new paths.' Exploration never so comfortable! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2021 9:31:00 PM

thanks, Gershon ~

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/7/2021 1:47:00 PM

Such a beautifully done haibun, Line:-) I enjoyed reading it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2021 3:25:00 PM

Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/7/2021 1:39:00 PM

Yes. I love the line old shoes new paths also... lovely writing. I enjoyed so . ... Love to you and God bless you, Gina

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Gina ~ much appreciated

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/7/2021 12:45:00 PM

Dear Line, your splendid haibun captures the renewal of Spring beautifully. “Old shoes new paths”.. how incredibly wonderful that is. Best wishes for a win, my friend.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan ~ most appreciated

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2021 12:05:00 PM

a joy to read a most delightful spring haibun, thanks for sharing Line, adding this gem to my faves :-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2021 12:54:00 PM

How wonderful, Jan. Most appreciated ~