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Spring Rain

finger painted sky
dotted star line above trees
as rain falls an owl calls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 7:12 PM
Karen, there's a lot here. I'm thinking of a sky at night with an isolated storm so that the starts are still visible in some part of the sky. This is wonderful to contemplate. It's serene. If I were confined to a bed and could not go outside, I would want you to read to me. Smiles!
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:38 AM
You’d be a fun person to read to Duke as you are imaginative, warm, witty and kind. I appreciate you! Hugs and smiles
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:52 AM
So interesting, Karen! You are a great poet!
Jones Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Wow what a nice compliment! I struggle with writing. But so honored you think so Kim!
HAYNES Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 8:57 PM
i enjoyed this haiku
Jones Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Great imagery for this haiku. Best for a win.
Jones Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Thanks Victor!
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