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Spring Pushups

Weeds pesky, noxious reach, creep, agitate dandelions, plantain, tulips, daffodils assemble, restore, thrive sterling, arresting Buds Diamante composed: May 5, 2021 Contest: Spring or Summer Diamante Sponsor: Caron Krutsinger

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2021 4:45:00 AM

Creative winning work. There are lots of weeds out there for the gardener to fight. Sad that we have a world that grows them without any effort and it takes a miracle to grow flowers. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/6/2021 6:33:00 AM

Hello Sara, You are so right when you note the persistent power of weeds - wish more of them had a flowering component. Thank you for your stop by + input. Cheers, Brian

Frances Schiavina

Date: 6/1/2021 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations Brian on your winning poem so realistic and colorfully descriptive

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/1/2021 7:32:00 AM

Thanks very much, Fances. I appreciate your drop by + encouraging comment. Sincerely, Brian

Gary Radice

Date: 5/27/2021 2:09:00 AM

I really enjoyed this Brian. From weeds to buds; from dying to thriving. I loved being led down this particular garden path. Cheers - Gary

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/27/2021 4:57:00 AM

Thanks very much, Gary. The diamante is a diversion from some of my edgy submissions on the Soupers site. Be well. Brian

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:06:00 PM

have you been peeking in my garden! many congratulations on your win Brian:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/20/2021 5:49:00 PM

Hi Jan, thanks very much for your congratulations. I enjoyed a good chuckle spurred by your endearing comment. All the best, Brian

Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/20/2021 9:26:00 AM

As a gardener, I love this one. You gave the weeds and buds personality. The title is clever as well. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/20/2021 1:53:00 PM

Thanks very much, Juliet. Kind of you to comment on my small offering. Best wishes, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/20/2021 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/20/2021 1:55:00 PM

Always appreciate a thumbs up! Regards, Brian