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Spring Peekaboo

Today, the long lost sun plays peekaboo, prodding patches of snow to evaporate. Green tinges on trees faintly accentuate bare branches with a halo effect in view. Yawning yellow daffodils nod and protrude, after egregiously succeeding to navigate winter weather alerts sent to intimidate. Tornadoes rage in April's snowstorms too. Lackadaisical plant growth from lack of light fosters fortuitous environmental confusion. Steady streams of daylight spurn roots to incite trees and flowers to bloom almost overnight. Animals shedding winter fur is not an illusion. Awaiting spring tends to aggravate and delight. April 7, 2018 Italian/Petrachan Sonnet Rhyme - abbaabba cdccdc

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Date: 4/7/2018 9:21:00 PM
I enjoyed your Italian sonnet, Susan, best of luck in the contest. John
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, John. Appreciate your input.
Date: 4/7/2018 8:12:00 PM
An Italian Sonnet at its best!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thank you. First sonnet I ever tried. Was challenging.
Date: 4/7/2018 7:11:00 PM
Spring is just peeping around the corner...A nice take on a Peekaboo...All the best Susan...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:46:00 AM
Same to you! Thank you. I know it is logically, but it snowed again yesterday...
Date: 4/7/2018 6:08:00 PM
Awesome welcome to spring..well articulated, scenic poem, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much! Appreciate your input.
Date: 4/7/2018 5:31:00 PM
what wonderful spring imagery Susan and I love the line about the yawning daffodils nodding - how brilliant a description!:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Very kind.

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