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Spring Pastel Hue

Pastels in bright hue Sporadic ebony limbs Soon to be blessed ~~~* With green lush mosses Whilst all around this haven blooms to it's fullest ~~~* http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-12.php

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Date: 10/23/2010 3:20:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Hope life is treating you kindly. Karen

Randall Smith

Date: 10/17/2010 11:53:00 AM

I am just learning to write at 61....great web site by the way.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2010 6:47:00 AM

Oh yes, it's so nice to see your portrait of spring, James. It serves as a reminder that just as dawn always follows the darkness, spring always follows winter. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn

De R

Date: 10/17/2010 3:10:00 AM

Nice to see a poem about spring and blooming, cause it's really cold here, so this warmed me a little. :) Hugs, Emilia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2010 5:20:00 PM

I like the flow of the words of the last line..It reads well..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2010 12:22:00 PM

Nature in full bloom. Like a painting your words bring the vision about James. Hope you are enjoying your long weekend ;) Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/16/2010 6:01:00 AM

Thanks for the blog comment hon I kinda thought I had misspelled it, but, I was rushing! Aren't we all! I hope you entered my contest! (Nice imagery above!) Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2010 5:22:00 AM

Very impressive haiku with apt images, James

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/15/2010 5:23:00 PM

very pretty haiku