Spring Paen 1

Spear
      by
          delicate spear
(palely green) ---
Spring!
    Panoramas
                  slightly fabulous...
surpassing
               (always)
   --- all ways ---
                               daydreams
beautifully.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:43 PM
I am not sure whether to be more impressed by the brevity, the selection of words, or the unique way you have typed this one; I guess I will be impressed by all three Leo.
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 9:53 PM
So beautifully expressed, Leo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 11:53 PM
Lovely, Leo.
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