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Spring, Oh So Close

Sunny today but Oh what a chill The wind inhales and exhales the trees bend on the hill Winnie the Poohs Blustery Day just cannot compete In like a lion and out like a lamb I am so tired of paying for heat I long for crocuses, tulips and green it seems like ages since they have been seen

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Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 3/24/2015 9:07:00 AM

cute and lovely

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/22/2015 12:28:00 AM

I can relate to this for sure! Spring will be here before you know it. Just hang in there, Willow, and keep up the great writing!

Willow Lawrence
Date: 3/22/2015 5:43:00 PM

YES, some flowers are blooming, today was sunny and 60. :) thank you for the kind words. Willow

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/21/2015 3:51:00 PM

BAH....Very good dear...

Willow Lawrence
Date: 3/22/2015 5:43:00 PM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2015 2:42:00 PM

we have lovely spring weather here now Willow and the flowers are painting the boarders with a riot of colour - lovely spring write with great imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx

Willow Lawrence
Date: 3/15/2015 2:53:00 PM

I am sorry you still have sadness in your life, when things get better you will truly appreciate the happy moments! hugs back to u! Willow

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2015 2:46:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) with all my recent sadness I still manange to write with humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Willow Lawrence
Date: 3/15/2015 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Mistress of Mirth! Really enjoyed that one :) Willow