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Spring of Rebirth

A pageant of hued flappers drapes the air, where maiden butterflies awake upon fresh tunes gliding in crystal winged sensation: how beautiful they are, enough to initiate my own spring of rebirth as April endows this hint of childlike wonder: my breath emerging while rafters explode in velvet glow… tossed petals unfurling their limbs while monarchs circle along ovules with flamenco swings, so luminous. Much like this season they are born from, rustlings weave a glazed ascent in radiant pirouette of joy: I encounter a different scene, a different potion of life through this moth-like shimmer from laced nights: at last, spring’s bosom is decked in flickers that my own awakening yields to this cycle’s homage for butterflies’ swift magic : tassels waltzing… until their charmed life- spans are done. For Rob Carmack's Screwed X111 Contest Resubmitted 4/25/2016
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Richards Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Always uniquely your own, you capture words like butterflies, and make them more beautiful than at first glance! :) Congrats for this 2nd chance!
Flower Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Simply beautiful, my dear. Congrats on your top placement. Hugs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Your beautiful poem is worthy of high praise Nette. Your unique expression of spring's birth is wonderfully stated by the use of butterflies in their colorful beauty and freedom of flight. # 7
Devnath  Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 12:02 PM
An excellent beauty is drawn with beautiful thought. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl
Dunn Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Dear Nette You are blessed with an inspirational muse of natures perfection, this is simply marvelous, cheri
Marty Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Truly, spring is a moment of renewal! You've seized the scene and painted it's vibrancy and briefness to last forever within this exhilarating poem!
Parker Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:25 PM
A spring I would enjoy being enveloped by..good luck my friend
Gonza Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:59 PM
I feel a refreshing sway in your poem and the presentation-- the form, in which you've written these springtime motif about rebirth is exquisite!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:14 PM
- This is one stunning Spring poem, Nette - I wish you a lovely Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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