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Spring Melt

The escarpment in spring is a beautiful sight Way above, I see the melting snow Travelling down a zaigzag course That Mother nature traces Like a little waterfall flowing to the bottom Running through a field, moving more rapidly Becoming one body , growing stronger Eventually reaching a stream

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/9/2018 4:38:00 PM

What amazing imagery you have used to paint this picturesque piece! Well done, Darlene! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2018 12:38:00 PM

Hello Pandita, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/6/2018 1:05:00 AM

Nice one. many wishes to you, Kai

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2018 11:19:00 AM

Hello Kai Micheal, thank you for the lovely comment. Many wishes to you as well. have a nice day my friend.

Lisle Ryder

Date: 5/3/2018 3:33:00 AM

Lovely - I sense you live among mountains, and of course the stream would travelon to the sea.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/3/2018 9:52:00 AM

hello Lisle Ryder, no I do not live among the mountains. I use to live in a quiant town for 10 years. My husband and i would walk to the Bluewater Park and stare at the water for hours. it was relaxing to watch the water. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/2/2018 6:05:00 PM

I can see it through your words Darlene! Well done :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

Hello Heidi, it is a beautiful site. Have a nice day my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/2/2018 1:58:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned with beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2018 7:45:00 AM

Hello Ravi, hope you are having a nice day. Thank you foryour lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/1/2018 8:26:00 PM

This makes me want to go fly fishing for trout...my favorite past-time. Beautifully written and great imagery, Darlene, Have a nice evening!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2018 7:47:00 AM

Hello Charles, if you have warmer weather you are able to go fly fishing. Thank you for your lovely comment my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/1/2018 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Darlene, Such a wonderful thought,

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2018 2:26:00 PM

Hello Mike, it is also beautiful to see. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/1/2018 7:08:00 AM

Lush imagery paints this posh pastoral poem, Darlene. Any poem that uses the word " escarpment" is a winner in my book. Beautiful poetry, my dear friend. Love and joy always.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2018 7:18:00 AM

Hello Freddie,I hope all is well with you. Thank you for your lovely comment. This is how I see the escarpment as I create this poem. Peace and Love to you always.my friend.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/30/2018 4:08:00 PM

Your words are magical and beautifully expressed. A moment of peace and tranquility has been transposed to the page with skill and finesse, well done my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2018 5:14:00 PM

Hello Emile, thank you for the lovely comment.Emile, the escarpment is beautiful to see in the spring.Have a nice day my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2018 3:41:00 PM

such a wonderful spring-scene; delightful all the way,darlene..huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2018 5:16:00 PM

Hello Nette, it is a wonderful spring scene. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice dsay my friend.