Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Free verse

Spring Melt

The escarpment in spring is a beautiful sight
Way above, I see the melting snow
Travelling down a zaigzag course
That Mother nature traces

Like a little waterfall flowing to the bottom
Running through a field, moving more rapidly
Becoming one body , growing stronger
Eventually reaching a stream

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Pandita Sietesantos May 9, 2018 at 4:38 PM What amazing imagery you have used to paint this picturesque piece! Well done, Darlene! Hugs. Pandita Darlene De Beaulieu May 17, 2018 at 12:38 PM Hello Pandita, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Kai Michael Neumann May 6, 2018 at 1:05 AM Nice one. many wishes to you, Kai Darlene De Beaulieu May 6, 2018 at 11:19 AM Hello Kai Micheal, thank you for the lovely comment. Many wishes to you as well. have a nice day my friend.

Lisle Ryder May 3, 2018 at 3:33 AM Lovely - I sense you live among mountains, and of course the stream would travelon to the sea. Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2018 at 9:52 AM hello Lisle Ryder, no I do not live among the mountains. I use to live in a quiant town for 10 years. My husband and i would walk to the Bluewater Park and stare at the water for hours. it was relaxing to watch the water. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands May 2, 2018 at 6:05 PM I can see it through your words Darlene! Well done :) Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2018 at 9:53 AM Hello Heidi, it is a beautiful site. Have a nice day my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam May 2, 2018 at 1:58 AM Excellent. Well penned with beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing it. Darlene De Beaulieu May 2, 2018 at 7:45 AM Hello Ravi, hope you are having a nice day. Thank you foryour lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina May 1, 2018 at 8:26 PM This makes me want to go fly fishing for trout...my favorite past-time. Beautifully written and great imagery, Darlene, Have a nice evening! Darlene De Beaulieu May 2, 2018 at 7:47 AM Hello Charles, if you have warmer weather you are able to go fly fishing. Thank you for your lovely comment my friend.

Mike Gentile May 1, 2018 at 10:24 AM Beautiful imagery, Darlene, Such a wonderful thought, Darlene De Beaulieu May 1, 2018 at 2:26 PM Hello Mike, it is also beautiful to see. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 1, 2018 at 7:08 AM Lush imagery paints this posh pastoral poem, Darlene. Any poem that uses the word " escarpment" is a winner in my book. Beautiful poetry, my dear friend. Love and joy always. Darlene De Beaulieu May 1, 2018 at 7:18 AM Hello Freddie,I hope all is well with you. Thank you for your lovely comment. This is how I see the escarpment as I create this poem. Peace and Love to you always.my friend.

Emile Pinet April 30, 2018 at 4:08 PM Your words are magical and beautifully expressed. A moment of peace and tranquility has been transposed to the page with skill and finesse, well done my friend, Emile. Darlene De Beaulieu April 30, 2018 at 5:14 PM Hello Emile, thank you for the lovely comment.Emile, the escarpment is beautiful to see in the spring.Have a nice day my friend.

Nette Onclaud April 30, 2018 at 3:41 PM such a wonderful spring-scene; delightful all the way,darlene..huggs Darlene De Beaulieu April 30, 2018 at 5:16 PM Hello Nette, it is a wonderful spring scene. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice dsay my friend.