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Spring Magnificence

The dawn wakes and feels the breeze of the blooming Lilac trees- Tangerine skies streak the west with charm in a Blue Jay’s nest. The immense mount speaks of might and graces us with splendor- Under this moonlit Spring night the stardust does surrender. 7 syllables in each line 56 syllables total howmanysyllables.com May 28, 2018

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Date: 3/12/2019 9:23:00 AM
Lovely write Lu Loo, is your soup mail working?
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Date: 6/5/2018 10:56:00 AM
An artist eye sees the imagery in nature,Laura, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2018 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win with such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/4/2018 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of nature! Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 6/3/2018 9:19:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:50:00 PM
This is lovely, Laura !! Love your tangerine skies !!
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on your beautifully written winning poem:)
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:41:00 PM
"The splendor of a moonlit night".. Congrats on your win Luloo
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Date: 5/29/2018 4:03:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Laura! So "springy".
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Date: 5/28/2018 3:51:00 PM
What a beautiful image!
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