Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Spring Magnificence

The dawn wakes and feels the breeze 
                 of the blooming Lilac trees-
                                 Tangerine skies streak the west
                  with charm in a Blue Jay’s nest.

    The immense mount speaks of might
                      and graces us with splendor-
  Under this moonlit Spring night
               the stardust does surrender.  



7 syllables in each line
56 syllables total
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May 28, 2018

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Joseph May March 12, 2019 at 9:23 AM Lovely write Lu Loo, is your soup mail working?

Eve Roper June 5, 2018 at 10:56 AM An artist eye sees the imagery in nature,Laura, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 5, 2018 at 2:31 AM Congratulations, Laura on your win with such a beautiful poem.

Susan Gentry June 4, 2018 at 12:36 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of nature! Enjoyed reading.

Line Gauthier June 3, 2018 at 9:19 PM Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your top win.

Carrie Richards June 3, 2018 at 8:50 PM This is lovely, Laura !! Love your tangerine skies !!

Daniel Turner June 3, 2018 at 8:18 PM Congratulations Laura on your beautifully written winning poem:)

Joseph May June 3, 2018 at 7:41 PM "The splendor of a moonlit night".. Congrats on your win Luloo

Carole Duet May 29, 2018 at 4:03 PM What a lovely poem, Laura! So "springy".

Sunlite Wanter May 28, 2018 at 3:51 PM What a beautiful image!