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Spring Ladybug

munching on aphids
perched atop an aspen leaf ~
         a lone ladybug



Submitted for...
Spring Haiku - Traditional Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 03/27/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Congrats and kudos Edward on your first place win! Every year we get ladybugs who eat the aphids on our apple trees! They are a sure sign of spring! Well done - creative take on the contest! Sending you Easter blessings of joy!
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) A ladybug once landed on my shirt out of nowhere. I gently picked it off and let crawl on my palm as I watched it in awe, then I placed it on a leaf. Such a strikingly beautiful insect. I just couldn't kill it. I hope you had a great Easter!
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:15 PM
I thought for sure I commented to this before, but my comment is not here. Maybe another person wrote on ladybug? anyway, BIG congrats, Edward, on your well deserved win.
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Blessings, xoxo
Merryman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:48 AM
An excellent haiku, Edward! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Kim:-)
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:40 AM
super haiku I've seen a few ladybirds n our garden recently:-) man congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Jan:-) They're really beautiful and come in so many different colors!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day/week..........................
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Ed, congratulations on your first place win with your vivid haiku!
Ibeh Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so much for my placement and congratulations, Tania:-) Happy Easter!
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 11:28 AM
- A beautiful haiku, Edward :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) I appreciate it.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Darling haiku, terrific imagery.
Ibeh Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Thank you very much, Caren:-)
Summers Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 6:27 PM
This is an exceptional haiku. Best of luck with the contest. John
Ibeh Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Thank you very much, John:-)
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