Premiere Contest WinnerSpring Is In the Air

A pleasant gasp of warm air appears to give me sweet reprieve 
suddenly I feel alive and it is easy to believe 
that every flower blooms 
just to take away my gloom   
tis the season most enchanting with her open hearted weave 

she entwines my soul with wonder like a moth of ivory white  
resting softly on my shoulder I am feeling oh so light 
blessed month of April 
you who blessed my silver maple 
elevating me to new heights you raise me up like a flying kite  

Feb 22, 2022
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 6:49 AM
Nicely done, Vienna, my compliments on your much deserving win my friend, Aloha~William
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful spring write. it will be here soon. Have a great/blessed day..................
Mcguire Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 11:35 PM
Great Poem Mystic! Well deserved.
Dutta Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 10:49 PM
Big Congrats to win Top . Love.
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Delightful poem. Congrats on your top win ~
Hutchings Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations!! I love the metaphors and descriptive words you chose to use in your poem! You did a beautiful job!! God bless and much love...Meghan
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win Vie. Spring will bloom soon. Blessings xxoo
Calasibetta Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest. Lovely! XO Paulette
Mcintosh Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 4:18 AM
Yay. Congrats. Love this one. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Gasun Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 3:33 AM
Wow! Fantastic poem of spring. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
Jayasankar Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:55 AM
A lovely write on the magic of spring, enjoyed reading dear Vie..."every flower blooms just to take away my gloom"...beautiful line...Congratulations and hugs...~ Ani
Agustin Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 12:29 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight in Spring here in this "Springless" country of ours. God bless you.
Chutani Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Thankyou for participating in my contest. Your connect to Spring brought back so lovely & peaceful images of it for us too. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan
Horsman Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 8:35 PM
How could spring resist the pull of these wondrous words, from your poetic mind, Vie.
Seeker Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Wow! So happy to read this wonderful mood elevator! A trophy winner too, I see, congrats, Mystic Rose!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Amazing write - well-deserved! Love ~ Mala
Leffanta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Amazing how a bit of sunshine can do that! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Pandit Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Oh, how delightful! Much enjoyed the inspiration of your poem, Vienna.
Hankins Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Ah, Mystic Rose Rose, this is a poem after my own heart!!! I loved every word of it. Thanks for sharing.
Rose  Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Thank you dear Milton. I am waiting hungerly for that first breath of Spring, thank you for stopping by
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