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Spring Is In the Air

Spring is in the air.
And I can not wait
To see bold colors.
Like trees in plush coats
Or roses’ new dress.

Nature's reborn.
Fresh colors pop,
Flower buds bloom.
Nature's refreshed.

Birds sing songs.
Bumblebees start
working hard.
Bears wake up.

Days Last,
Longer

Too.

03/11/2021

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/12/2021 3:06:00 AM I like this form that you chose. Spring is always a favorite topic about which to write and to read. We have had some plants blooming and in my yard some got really hurt from heavy frost. Spring is still kind of iffy. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/11/2021 11:26:00 PM Alexis, not only is it a fantastic DH but you also made it alliterative? Wow! "Birds sing songs. Bumblebees start working hard. Bears wake up." Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/11/2021 8:09:00 PM I really like this form of poetry, and yours just amplifies how good it gets. Love it Alexis. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/11/2021 5:33:00 PM The way you've described it, Spring's all good!! Lovely written, Alexis. :) gw Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/11/2021 2:17:00 PM Beautifully evoked sights and sounds of spring, Alexis. All the best. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/11/2021 1:27:00 PM Beautiful spring verse Alexis, best of luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/11/2021 12:07:00 PM And with it the aii will be less humid and flowers will bloom. I'm waiting for my orchids to do that. Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/11/2021 11:36:00 AM Hello Alexis Y. yes Spring is in the air. Only a a small bock of snow is left to melt. A good sign. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2021 11:23:00 AM absolutely delightful Alexis I really love the lines about the trees and roses:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply