Alexis Y. Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Spring Is In the Air

Spring is in the air.
And I can not wait
To see bold colors.
Like trees in plush coats
Or roses’ new dress.

Nature's reborn.
Fresh colors pop,
Flower buds bloom.
Nature's refreshed.

Birds sing songs.
Bumblebees start
working hard.
Bears wake up.

Days Last,
Longer

Too.

03/11/2021

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Sara Kendrick March 12, 2021 at 3:06 AM I like this form that you chose. Spring is always a favorite topic about which to write and to read. We have had some plants blooming and in my yard some got really hurt from heavy frost. Spring is still kind of iffy. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Caren Krutsinger March 11, 2021 at 11:26 PM Alexis, not only is it a fantastic DH but you also made it alliterative? Wow! "Birds sing songs. Bumblebees start working hard. Bears wake up."

Harry Horsman March 11, 2021 at 8:09 PM I really like this form of poetry, and yours just amplifies how good it gets. Love it Alexis.

Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:33 PM The way you've described it, Spring's all good!! Lovely written, Alexis. :) gw

Vijay Pandit March 11, 2021 at 2:17 PM Beautifully evoked sights and sounds of spring, Alexis. All the best.

Tom Cunningham March 11, 2021 at 1:27 PM Beautiful spring verse Alexis, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar March 11, 2021 at 12:07 PM And with it the aii will be less humid and flowers will bloom. I'm waiting for my orchids to do that.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 11, 2021 at 11:36 AM Hello Alexis Y. yes Spring is in the air. Only a a small bock of snow is left to melt. A good sign. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 11:23 AM absolutely delightful Alexis I really love the lines about the trees and roses:-) hugs Jan xx