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Spring Is In the Air

Sparkle of dawn perks up inert callow greens Inviting a resurgence of dormant waterfalls When spring ignites revival of river’s journey Hidden far behind the soaring mountaintops. A blue bird lingers on a pink flowery branch Watching vibrant tulips in a graceful dance Where fragrant breeze sways budding fields As golden daybreak proposes a lyrical scene. Adoring pinkish white cherry blossom trees People cherish vistas of reflective river basin Meandering through a garden of red roses Wearing glitter of pleasantry on their faces. Yellow blossoms rise from long green stems Where red blooms comingle cohesive ways And butterflies roam searching sweet nectar Celebrating gleefully abundance of flowers. Sky has resumed wearing aquamarine blue Dissipating the vestiges of melancholic hues As spring's passion makes it abundantly clear A season of fervent love is flirting in the air. February 28, 2018 Placed first in standard contest #160 by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/15/2019 6:32:00 PM
A painter will never be able capture beauty- like you can with words. It is always Spring, when I hold your thoughts so close. Simply breathtaking Vijay. Congratulations on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/14/2019 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Date: 12/15/2018 11:21:00 AM
Hi Vijay, spring comes alive from the nib of your pen, as golden ink spreads your words across the page, painting such lovely visions within my mind. You create a living dream with your words my friend. I can place myself within the heart of your words and I am surrounded by the feeling and beauty of spring. An excellent write. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/7/2018 6:36:00 AM
How beautiful, Vijay: All the colors of spring and ‘trees in breezy postures.” You have captivated all our imaginations. I predict a high placement. Hugs,SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thank you SuZ.
Date: 3/4/2018 7:51:00 AM
This is such a beautiful spring write Vijay...Very well penned...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/3/2018 7:54:00 AM
Your imagery is fantastic; I can feel spring now.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2018 8:35:00 AM
Many thanks Caren..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/3/2018 2:12:00 AM
Very nice, heavenly.... Good luck..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2018 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Pashang.
Date: 3/2/2018 7:59:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Vijay--so alive and descriptive! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 3/2/2018 5:18:00 AM
Beautifully written poem Vijay, your words accentuates my longing for spring, well written and good luck in contest. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Roy..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/1/2018 10:01:00 PM
Wow... Soobeautiful... Beautiful descriptions and amazing imagery... You did a wonderful job here... Reads like a winner...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Supraja..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/1/2018 7:55:00 PM
Stanza four was especially lovely and inspiring for me. Nothing so beautiful as a field of flowers like that.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/1/2018 5:07:00 PM
Sounds as if you are describing heaven! ...beautiful artistry in this vision Vijay :) Oh if only...snowing here in "the mitten" today...burr! Have a wonderful day :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Chris..relief is on the way soon from the snowy season in the mitten..we have been good so far here in Maryland. Appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/28/2018 1:32:00 PM
Your colorful imagery throughout this poem is stunningly picturesque! I am sure it will make those still buried in snow long for spring. This should be a winner Vijay! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Connie..appreciate your kinds words...always value your feedback.
Date: 2/28/2018 1:31:00 PM
It would have been lovely to see a scenery similar to what you wrote about...Nevertheless...the imagery was vivid... All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your feedback.
Date: 2/28/2018 1:16:00 PM
Your beautiful descriptive imagery calls for spring to come without delay, Vijay! All you need now is canvas, brushes and paint. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/28/2018 12:50:00 PM
I really enjoyed your refreshing entry, overflowing with beautiful imagery of Spring. Best of Luck in the contest !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Mike--appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/28/2018 10:54:00 AM
vijay,ohh stunning details leading to the loveliness of spring!.. huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:12:00 AM
Amazing poem Vijay. This is a beautiful display of spring! Well written for the contest! I enjoyed it very much. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kind words..appreciate the comments.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:06:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, You captured the essence of spring very well in this well written piece. The imagery within this write is amazing. I could just see every thing and it's looks breathtaking. I love the Spring season and this piece reminded of why I love it so much. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for your detailed feedback..always happy to read your comments.
Date: 2/28/2018 7:47:00 AM
- Awesome picture in beautiful scenery and colors, Vijay :) ... I'm looking forward to spring ... but it's still cold winter :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..enjoyed reading your kind words.
Date: 2/28/2018 7:13:00 AM
Now this is vivid imagery, a shame that Spring seems to be delaying itself... Some really great stanzas in this one, good luck with the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 7:17:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Silent One..always appreciate and value your feedback.
Date: 2/28/2018 7:03:00 AM
Spring is dancing throughout your verses my friend, Vijay ! Excellent
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 7:16:00 AM
Always happy to see your kind words my friend..appreciate and value your feedback.
Date: 2/28/2018 6:57:00 AM
I like your included splashes of color, here. You have given a lot of detail to the coming of spring...well written, without rhyme.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thank you RAP for your kind words..much appreciate and value your feedback.

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