CayCay Godwin Poet Acrostic

SPRING IS COMING SOON

Songbirds tell us all good morning and
Plants bloom diverse buds most stunning,
Reminding us newness is coming.
Idle no more, grass grows its carpet -
Nudging bare feet to wiggle rub it and 
Giggle from the happiness of it.

Inside life ends, doors and windows open
So senses may all be reawoken.

Company is sought for barbecues
On the first free day warmth queues.
Minds and hearts are light with promise
In air of gentle, honest solace.
Nature revels in her recital,
Glowing for all with charmed arrival.

Sunshine breaks any drab and dull routine
Once she shines upon the living scene.
Offering all the promise of rebirth,
New comes Spring’s joy to halo our earth.

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James Inman April 9, 2017 at 9:51 PM Sweet upbeat Spring poem CayCay.

Connie Marcum Wong March 20, 2017 at 3:01 PM This is beautiful CayCay! I especially love your last line which conjures in the mind such a stunning image. Brava! I hope this does real well CayCay. 7 ; )

Maria Williams March 19, 2017 at 6:57 AM Mother Nature on Parade, she just loves Spring doesn't she? You've described this beautifully.

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2017 at 10:02 PM This is really cool. You rhymed it like she wanted but with different syllable length lines, much like a quintain type poem. Very nicely done and should do well in the contest! ARe there any recent poems you wish I would read, Caycay? Let me know for next time I am here!

Probir Gupta March 18, 2017 at 9:41 AM One can hear the footsteps of spring ... rings of beauty in your poem ... a nice read for all of us ...

Anthony Mark March 18, 2017 at 9:34 AM Ok, ..acrostics are hard enough using good enjambment, however, to attempt end rhyme was always going to be a battle between technical difficulty of format, versus content , I feel you compromised too much flow for the rhyme, it's interesting but a little sterile in its overuse of key words for words sake, but others may say differently..Ian.xxx

Cheryl Hoffman March 18, 2017 at 8:53 AM Love your creative inspiring take on Spring time CayCay! G/L in the contest!~Hugs Che :)

Jan Allison March 18, 2017 at 8:49 AM You've captured the essence of spring CayCay:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis March 18, 2017 at 8:43 AM Dearest CayCay your poem is like watching my garden bloom! A great feeling! Very much enjoyed!

Eileen Manassian March 18, 2017 at 7:14 AM Lovely acrostic, dear. This is just what spring is all about. You've captured the essence so beautifully. :) Hugs, dear

Roy Pett March 18, 2017 at 5:43 AM Excellent mood lifting acrostic CayCay, lovely thoughts of spring and summer are portrayed in your poem, good luck in contest, Roy. :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 18, 2017 at 12:29 AM Beautiful imagery in your acrostic, Cay Cay...'nature revels in her recital, glowing for all with her arrival'... I love these lines! Lots of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend, xxRhonda

Arthur Vaso March 17, 2017 at 10:45 PM OH my after this last snow storm I sure hope you are correct!!! Loved this soothing upbeat poem!