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Spring Is Coming Soon

Songbirds tell us all good morning and Plants bloom diverse buds most stunning, Reminding us newness is coming. Idle no more, grass grows its carpet - Nudging bare feet to wiggle rub it and Giggle from the happiness of it. Inside life ends, doors and windows open So senses may all be reawoken. Company is sought for barbecues On the first free day warmth queues. Minds and hearts are light with promise In air of gentle, honest solace. Nature revels in her recital, Glowing for all with charmed arrival. Sunshine breaks any drab and dull routine Once she shines upon the living scene. Offering all the promise of rebirth, New comes Spring’s joy to halo our earth. ... CayCay Jennings March 17, 2017

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James Inman

Date: 4/9/2017 9:51:00 PM

Sweet upbeat Spring poem CayCay.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2017 3:01:00 PM

This is beautiful CayCay! I especially love your last line which conjures in the mind such a stunning image. Brava! I hope this does real well CayCay. 7 ; )

Maria Williams

Date: 3/19/2017 6:57:00 AM

Mother Nature on Parade, she just loves Spring doesn't she? You've described this beautifully.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2017 10:02:00 PM

This is really cool. You rhymed it like she wanted but with different syllable length lines, much like a quintain type poem. Very nicely done and should do well in the contest! ARe there any recent poems you wish I would read, Caycay? Let me know for next time I am here!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/18/2017 9:41:00 AM

One can hear the footsteps of spring ... rings of beauty in your poem ... a nice read for all of us ...

Anthony Mark

Date: 3/18/2017 9:34:00 AM

Ok, ..acrostics are hard enough using good enjambment, however, to attempt end rhyme was always going to be a battle between technical difficulty of format, versus content , I feel you compromised too much flow for the rhyme, it's interesting but a little sterile in its overuse of key words for words sake, but others may say differently..Ian.xxx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/18/2017 8:53:00 AM

Love your creative inspiring take on Spring time CayCay! G/L in the contest!~Hugs Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2017 8:49:00 AM

You've captured the essence of spring CayCay:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/18/2017 8:43:00 AM

Dearest CayCay your poem is like watching my garden bloom! A great feeling! Very much enjoyed!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/18/2017 7:14:00 AM

Lovely acrostic, dear. This is just what spring is all about. You've captured the essence so beautifully. :) Hugs, dear

Roy Pett

Date: 3/18/2017 5:43:00 AM

Excellent mood lifting acrostic CayCay, lovely thoughts of spring and summer are portrayed in your poem, good luck in contest, Roy. :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/18/2017 12:29:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in your acrostic, Cay Cay...'nature revels in her recital, glowing for all with her arrival'... I love these lines! Lots of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend, xxRhonda

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/17/2017 10:45:00 PM

OH my after this last snow storm I sure hope you are correct!!! Loved this soothing upbeat poem!