Spring Into Haiku

Smiling Sakura
blows kisses to Bush Warbler
Dreams of distant love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Zarban Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 5:34 AM
So beautiful! Thank you.
Karim Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:17 PM
I see an image of a woman blowing bubbles in the springtime dreaming about her lover that's a million miles away...great Haiku!
Twinkle Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:24 AM
Wow! What a unique comment from you, dear Ayesha! You have great imagination! Thanks for your visits!
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, lily
Twinkle Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram for reading and commenting ;)
Jackson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. Linda x
Twinkle Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Linda for your kind comment ;)
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your win! lori
Twinkle Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Lori for reading and commenting ;)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:25 PM
Love your name too.
Twinkle Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:25 PM
what an adorable one. Congrats on the HM. I really like this one.
Twinkle Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:28 AM
Thanks Andrea ;)
Austin Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 11:14 AM
I love the form. This Haiku is gorgeous. Love, daver
Twinkle Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Thank you daver for your kind words.
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Lovely images creating a pleasant picture, nice take on the theme, good luck, Lily
Twinkle Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Dr Mehta for leaving your comment ;)
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