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Spring Into Haiku

Smiling Sakura blows kisses to Bush Warbler Dreams of distant love

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Gholamreza Zarban

Date: 12/31/2015 5:34:00 AM

So beautiful! Thank you.

Ayesha Karim

Date: 5/19/2014 9:17:00 PM

I see an image of a woman blowing bubbles in the springtime dreaming about her lover that's a million miles away...great Haiku!

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/22/2014 6:24:00 AM

Wow! What a unique comment from you, dear Ayesha! You have great imagination! Thanks for your visits!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:15:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, lily

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thanks Dr.Ram for reading and commenting ;)

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Linda x

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Linda for your kind comment ;)

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! lori

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Lori for reading and commenting ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:25:00 PM

what an adorable one. Congrats on the HM. I really like this one.

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Andrea ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:25:00 PM

Love your name too.

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:29:00 AM

Thanks!

Daver Austin

Date: 5/6/2014 11:14:00 AM

I love the form. This Haiku is gorgeous. Love, daver

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/8/2014 6:54:00 AM

Thank you daver for your kind words.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2014 1:30:00 AM

Lovely images creating a pleasant picture, nice take on the theme, good luck, Lily

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/1/2014 2:20:00 AM

Thank you Dr Mehta for leaving your comment ;)