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Spring In the Quiet Wood

The wood in spring quietly awaits sunlight
Wake up, wake up insists mother nature
End your gentle slumbering, winter has gone
Show us your beauty

Copyright © Nick Bagnall | Year Posted 2011

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/15/2011 3:41:00 PM Am waiting so patiently for your words to come true in my area of living Nick as Winter has left major scars from intense falling snow over and over again.. luv the dialogue of Mother Nature to sound the trumpet for Spring luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2011 3:13:00 PM back to this beauty. WEll, Nick, I do have a melancholy side from time to time, which is what confused you, but it rarely affects me in my life. (and melancholy can only help produce a different quality of poetry!) thanks for your welcome comments as always! andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/14/2011 10:47:00 AM Enjoyed the use of personification to give life to both mother nature and the woods, Nick. Up North the woods (but for the evergreens) do seem to be sleeping in winter. Here in Florida, things stay green year round for the most part. Nice work! Thanks for your comments. I wrote the orignal poem on which that one was based when I was in college. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/14/2011 8:38:00 AM Enjoyed reading this one very much..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Your presence there was uplifting...Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/14/2011 5:20:00 AM This is a real beauty Nick, thanks for the smiles you provided with this gem ;) Login to Reply

Dana Smith Date: 3/10/2011 12:04:00 PM LOVE this. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/10/2011 12:45:00 AM wow, I'm glad I got to see this wonderful NEW post from you before I go to bed so late tonight! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/9/2011 10:09:00 AM Hi Nick :) This brings such nice and beautiful images to mind-- I love how you made this like a gentle wake up call-- and you sure got me intrigued with the form that you used, haven't come across this before! thank you for your inspiring words in my poem :D Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/9/2011 10:09:00 AM enjoy your day! & this is nikko btw, I'm just being silly with my name :D Login to Reply