Spring In the Air

Soft breeze on my neck---
the warmth of the midday sun
blooming white lilies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:14 PM
GREAT imagery with this one, Brandee. Congrats on the HM.Andrea
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February 2, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Another win for this haiku! Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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May 4, 2009 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Winter Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Thanks for your kind congrats. Right back to you on this breathtaking win! Love, Shar
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May 1, 2009 at 12:17 PM
You paint a picture with words in this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
Strand Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:17 AM
Congrats on your success in Abe's contest. Brandee.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Congrats with your HM in the contest...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Heck Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 1:01 PM
A lovely Haiku. I can't wait for Spring to arrive. It is freezing here in NYC. Peace always, John
Moreno Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Great words in a well penned haiku...Raul
Degenhardt Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 6:54 AM
This makes me wish for warmer weather, love the imagery and form of this. Michael
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