Spring Hiku 8

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2025 7:16:00 PM

Very interesting presentation. It took me a while to get that the word regain was going upward. Actually I think the bottom line is not even needed because the line about regaining their nest is the twist! Congrats on your win with Brian

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/11/2025 5:53:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. I think the last line is meant as a "little surprise." Furthermore, it serves as a word pay to rhyme with the two preceding lines. Sending you the blessings of light.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2025 9:39:00 AM

Great job on the haiku set and superposition; congratulations on your contest victory, dear poet. Hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/11/2025 5:40:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes, Sending you the blessings of light.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/10/2025 9:01:00 AM

How descriptive and soul warming is the way youv painted imagery throughout dear krishnanand, i absolutely love also the softness of your wordplay and the way youv arranged your lines in such a creative manner! I see why brian likes it! Congratulations. Pleasure reading! Sending you light always

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/11/2025 5:35:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the above write, your soulful comments and kind wishes, which have raised my spirits high. Wish you the blessings of light.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/10/2025 8:35:00 AM

They're in flight, right? I see wings? How cool is that! I enjoyed your gem a great deal. Impressive ... CayCay

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/10/2025 8:46:00 AM

Thanks a lot friend for appreciating the above write. The wren in the picture can be viewed as sitting close to its nest or preparing to regain its nest. Wish you a delightful weekend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/10/2025 8:32:00 AM

They're in flight, right? I see wings? Very well done, I enjoyed your gem a great deal. Impressive ... CayCay