Krishnanand Guptar Poet Haiku

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Spring Hiku 8

          Spring Hiku 8


 spring sun s
                      i 
                          n
                             k 
                                 s    to    r   e   s   t

                                     a i n  their nest
                                 g 
                             e
 warbling wrens  r 

	
church    bells    chime    from    west.

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Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2025 at 7:16 PM Very interesting presentation. It took me a while to get that the word regain was going upward. Actually I think the bottom line is not even needed because the line about regaining their nest is the twist! Congrats on your win with Brian Krishnanand Guptar May 11, 2025 at 5:53 AM Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. I think the last line is meant as a "little surprise." Furthermore, it serves as a word pay to rhyme with the two preceding lines. Sending you the blessings of light.

Sotto Poet May 10, 2025 at 9:39 AM Great job on the haiku set and superposition; congratulations on your contest victory, dear poet. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Krishnanand Guptar May 11, 2025 at 5:40 AM Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes, Sending you the blessings of light.

Ink Empress May 10, 2025 at 9:01 AM How descriptive and soul warming is the way youv painted imagery throughout dear krishnanand, i absolutely love also the softness of your wordplay and the way youv arranged your lines in such a creative manner! I see why brian likes it! Congratulations. Pleasure reading! Sending you light always Krishnanand Guptar May 11, 2025 at 5:35 AM Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the above write, your soulful comments and kind wishes, which have raised my spirits high. Wish you the blessings of light.

CayCay Godwin May 10, 2025 at 8:35 AM They're in flight, right? I see wings? How cool is that! I enjoyed your gem a great deal. Impressive ... CayCay Krishnanand Guptar May 10, 2025 at 8:46 AM Thanks a lot friend for appreciating the above write. The wren in the picture can be viewed as sitting close to its nest or preparing to regain its nest. Wish you a delightful weekend.

CayCay Godwin May 10, 2025 at 8:32 AM They're in flight, right? I see wings? Very well done, I enjoyed your gem a great deal. Impressive ... CayCay