Spring Heartbearts Rhyming Senyru



                             4/30/2025

 
               
                      Glints of Spring starlight

                      Light April ‘s flowers tonight

                      Hearts melt in moonlight


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Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:10 PM
a little gem, Pangie. Hope you had a lovely Easter day
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April 22, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Easte was great, sane wisg for you, eddie gradueates And then leaces CA for a ubiversity in the Midwesy, he is a young man now, no longer a boty, Majoring in finance and business.unbelibale how they grow,,,Pangie
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April 21, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Hello Panagiot6a, the stars glittering in the sky is beautiful. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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April 23, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes poets seem to write about the stars and the moon. Yes I remember the star on top of the Christmas tree. Hugs. /Darlene xxx
Romios Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Yesm Darle, the heavenly codies are an attraction to oets, thinkers and those who writem The scientific community, as wll, i bet most ofus remember the star on top of the Chrstmas trree))) Thanks for the visit Pangie
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 10:35 PM
The flow of the lines feels just right, Panagiota. Moonlit Melodies, gw
Romios Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 1:50 PM
How vey nice of you , gw! Homestly, I liked it, thank you for taking your valuable time to post, I have been busy writing an autobiography and I also started a novel. And no, I don’t want to be famous! I am already infamous.)))
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April 15, 2025 at 8:10 AM
A lovely, rhyming senyru! Beautiful, Pangie.
Romios Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Tom! I am glad to hear from you. It’s been a long time.. i, too, love this Senryu, although I have written the other type that is way populer here! Pangie
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April 11, 2025 at 4:03 PM
A sweet poem full of wonderful melodies! How wonderful.
Romios Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Hey Maria> thank you for taking time to comement Such a kind response is appreciatedi, I am glad you heard meodies. Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 7:46 AM
A lovely romantic scene you've created Pangie, hope you're keeping well. Tom
Romios Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Hello Tom! How nice of you to say this about the Senryu. Loving keeps us young and alive, and smiling. I deeply appreciate our lng friendship. Thank you for standing by me through thick and thin. My health abounds! (Five, first drraft chapters of book done) Pangie
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April 11, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Hi Pangie, spring is my favourite season, the world seems a whole lot different, hope your keeping well dear friend. xx
Romios Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Hi John! Spring is the best part and I agree my favorite part of the year. today will be 80° where I live. It gets warm here and stays warm until October.. And I have written plenty about this before. It’s almost like a constant spring here because the trees are always green! No snow.But I know when its Spring because the flowers near my veranda are intoxicating! Mmm! Your friend across the pond! Pangie
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