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Spring Has Sprung

Birds
trilling, 
butterflies
flitting, flora
arrayed in colors
of the rainbow,
delighting
buzzing 
bees.


4/7/21
Entered in Caren Krutsinger's 
Spring Ninette Contest

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Christuraj Alex

May 8, 2021 at 2:58 PM

I could not succeed in writing one of such. So Great!

Heidi Sands

April 26, 2021 at 2:06 PM

This is a beauty and flows well wrapping up the ending smoothly too. Congratulations for your win :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 25, 2021 at 9:05 AM

Congratulations on your win. Spring is in the air. "A Beautiful Write" Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Merryman

April 25, 2021 at 1:32 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Juliet Ligon

April 11, 2021 at 12:51 PM

I can just picture all the colors and the movement of spring creatures. Good luck in the contest.

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Thank you, Juliet!

Alexis Y.

April 8, 2021 at 8:20 PM

Hi Kim, You’ve penned a good Spring “ Ninette.” for the contest. It is lovely, and the imagery is stunning. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Anisha Dutta

April 8, 2021 at 5:36 AM

BEAUTIFUL with striking Title. All the Best. Anisha

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Thank you, Anisha!

Gershon Wolf

April 7, 2021 at 7:47 PM

Sprung in so many ways that appeal to the senses in your delightful ninette, Kim. Thanks, gw

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Judy Ball

April 7, 2021 at 7:46 PM

Mmmmm! Can hardly wait but here in Alberta I have to wait a little longer. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Thank you, Judy!

JC Brul

April 7, 2021 at 7:15 PM

I love this cute and refreshing treat! Thank you for sharing!

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:50 PM

Thank you JCB!

Robert Pettit

April 7, 2021 at 6:58 PM

Looks like I've got more stiff competition in Caren's contest. Good write.

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:50 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2021 at 3:57 PM

birds and bees, great way to go with your ninette!!

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:50 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2021 at 2:48 PM

Very creative work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page to tell me about my placement in your contest. Sara

Kim Merryman

April 17, 2021 at 3:49 PM

Thank you, Sara and you are welcome!