Spring Giants

I watch this high drama
Complete with giants,
Eventually, reduced by wind and waves…

Bergs driven south
Enter our outer harbor
Reach for a refuge but instead are
Grounded on massive, rocky shores
Struggling to be set free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Wonderful! A grand image of icebergs looming like giants freeing themselves from Glacier lands. All the best, Brian
Turner Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:05 AM
I think that would be an awesome sight, Elizabeth. A very cool poem:)
Feeley Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:31 AM
thank you Daniel. This was the first time that we have seen ice bergs up close.
Ricci Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Good Morning Elizabeth. Welcome to poetrysoup. I love the voice and tone of this entry. It is one that must be read out load with emphasis and feeling. Never did you stray from its title. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Take care and enjoy poetrysoup.
Feeley Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Lisa for your kind words and encouragement. I did read it out loud to my sister who lives in the Great Lakes area.
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