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Spring Giants

I watch this high drama Complete with giants, Eventually, reduced by wind and waves… Bergs driven south Enter our outer harbor Reach for a refuge but instead are Grounded on massive, rocky shores Struggling to be set free

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/17/2023 7:08:00 PM

Wonderful! A grand image of icebergs looming like giants freeing themselves from Glacier lands. All the best, Brian

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/15/2023 7:05:00 AM

I think that would be an awesome sight, Elizabeth. A very cool poem:)

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 3/15/2023 7:31:00 AM

thank you Daniel. This was the first time that we have seen ice bergs up close.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2023 5:31:00 AM

Good Morning Elizabeth. Welcome to poetrysoup. I love the voice and tone of this entry. It is one that must be read out load with emphasis and feeling. Never did you stray from its title. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Take care and enjoy poetrysoup.

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 3/15/2023 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Lisa for your kind words and encouragement. I did read it out loud to my sister who lives in the Great Lakes area.