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Spring Gem Monoku Contest / JCB Brul

spring gem


spring paints earth with stunningness -
man gets high from her brushes jeweled touch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Miller Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 4:35 AM
A real gem indeed, congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Big congrats. I am still kicking myself on forgetting to enter this one. Yours truly deserved a first placement
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your first place monoku CayCay! I like the imagery!
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 9:38 PM
A real gem here!
Crandall Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 7:45 AM
Good one - Spring's raring to go with that paint brush!
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 8:36 PM
Dear CayCay, yes, spring isn't just a season, but a potent, visual narcotic that clears away the winter withdrawal. You’ve captured that specific, light-headed euphoria we all feel when the first real colors finally break through the gray. Amen! Blessings, CayCay, Daniel
Godwin Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 1:16 AM
I love your generous, contagious, bright outlooks fertilizing Soup land here, there, everywhere. You are now bestowed the Title "Soup Uplifter" (unless you prefer Sir Harmonizer?), yes, I just decided it is so, you already fill the roll. Thank you and proceed. Hope you are grinning just like in every photo.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:14 PM
Your "spring gem" is a lovely Monoku write. Spring will be here soon. Hooray!!! "Good Luck" I did, "Spring Gem Now Appearing." Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away................
Hind Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 9:24 PM
lovely, CayCay!!
Singh Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 9:22 PM
Beautiful.Wish you the best in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:23 AM
Spring always an inspiration for poets and artists, good luck in the contest CayCay. Tom
Winter Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:06 AM
Beautifully written, I missed your presence so much! Best, Anne
Godwin Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 1:21 AM
I hope it was in a good way, sometimes missing someone is wonderful. And, as we both know, sometimes hell sucky. How's the color in your world these days? Would love a soup update about how many smiles you are averaging daily or weekly, (don't make me offer monthly) now. Hugging you ... CayCay
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