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Spring Forward

This winter I am so much over
I need to run out in the clover
Time for spring to forward
Maybe I'll just move shoreward
And spend my time as a fearful rover.

Contest:  Spring Forward
Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © Janet Eaton | Year Posted 2015

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/17/2015 7:49:00 PM Ok Janet - to give you baby steps IF you start a limerick the traditional way- your rythym will START out correctly- you can start [There was a] or [There once was a] limericks traditionally use a name & a place [This is not necessary for the contest or once you have the hang of it] The lines are normally LONG/LONG/short/short/LONG Login to Reply Janet Eaton Date: 2/18/2015 6:10:00 AM Debbie, Thank you for taking time to review these. I am back to the writing board to see if I can figure this out. I'll get there:) Baby steps You are the best THANK YOU!!!!! Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/17/2015 7:58:00 PM Over is too hard a word for the last word in lines 1,2,5 there isn't enough choice

Poesy Relish Date: 2/17/2015 11:11:00 AM :) :) nice one Janet.. best wishes.. nad Login to Reply Janet Eaton Date: 2/17/2015 11:57:00 AM Thanks Nad. Hope you are having a great day. Janet

Jan Allison Date: 2/16/2015 4:26:00 PM made me smile Janet - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Janet Eaton Date: 2/16/2015 4:37:00 PM Thanks Jan, my first limerick, it was fun to write. Janet