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Spring Forward

This winter I am so much over
I need to run out in the clover
Time for spring to forward
Maybe I'll just move shoreward
And spend my time as a fearful rover.

Contest:  Spring Forward
Debbie Guzzi

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Debbie Guzzi

February 17, 2015 at 7:49 PM

Ok Janet - to give you baby steps IF you start a limerick the traditional way- your rythym will START out correctly- you can start [There was a] or [There once was a] limericks traditionally use a name & a place [This is not necessary for the contest or once you have the hang of it] The lines are normally LONG/LONG/short/short/LONG

Janet Eaton

February 18, 2015 at 6:10 AM

Debbie, Thank you for taking time to review these. I am back to the writing board to see if I can figure this out. I'll get there:) Baby steps You are the best THANK YOU!!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

February 17, 2015 at 7:58 PM

Over is too hard a word for the last word in lines 1,2,5 there isn't enough choice