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Spring Footles

Mud season yucky mucky Hummingbird in flight zig jig A flock of robins swinging singing New grass sprout shout Flying butterfly flutter putter Chipmunks at feeders seed greed Lilac trees blooms perfumes A bright goldfinch yellow fellow Tree branches twig sprig

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/22/2023 11:45:00 AM

Your "Spring Footles" is a fun write. Have a fun day writing away................

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/22/2023 3:54:00 PM

Paula, thank you.

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2023 10:58:00 PM

Beautiful Tania. Clever and ingenious.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/13/2023 3:44:00 AM

Valsa, thank you.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/8/2023 6:40:00 AM

Wow a footle, sounds and reads very superb. Enjoyed each nature stanza with sights and sounds. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/9/2023 3:39:00 AM

Thank you

Paige Hind

Date: 3/7/2023 9:28:00 AM

Love the lightheartedness of this!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/7/2023 3:52:00 PM

Paige, thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/5/2023 4:01:00 PM

This a lovely well-written footle, Tania. Really enjoyed your creation. Congratulations on your win.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 4:22:00 PM

Lasaad, thank you.

John Lawless

Date: 3/5/2023 3:22:00 PM

You nailed it Tania.....a spring "Pop-Up" poem, nicely done

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 4:22:00 PM

John, thank you.

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/5/2023 12:03:00 PM

Very great poem , this is hilarious the way you put this together and choice of words, love it

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 1:35:00 PM

Stephan, thank you.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/5/2023 9:58:00 AM

My favorites are "yucky mucky: and "blooms perfumes" "yellow fellow". I like them all but those 3 are my favorites. Thanks for letting me comment on your poem. Have a great Sunday afternoon:)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 10:05:00 AM

Daniel, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/5/2023 8:05:00 AM

You zigzagged amongst nature. Lovely.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 8:26:00 AM

Victor, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2023 6:50:00 AM

... sound ... smell ... and beauty ... like your play with words, Tania :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/5/2023 7:40:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you, I have fun with these.