Tania Kitchin Poet Footle

Spring Footles

Mud season 
yucky mucky

Hummingbird in flight
zig jig

A flock of robins
swinging singing

New grass
sprout shout

Flying butterfly
flutter putter

Chipmunks at feeders
seed greed

Lilac trees
blooms perfumes

A bright goldfinch
yellow fellow

Tree branches
twig sprig

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Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2023 at 11:45 AM Your "Spring Footles" is a fun write. Have a fun day writing away................ Tania Kitchin March 22, 2023 at 3:54 PM Paula, thank you.

Valsa George March 12, 2023 at 10:58 PM Beautiful Tania. Clever and ingenious. Tania Kitchin March 13, 2023 at 3:44 AM Valsa, thank you.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 8, 2023 at 6:40 AM Wow a footle, sounds and reads very superb. Enjoyed each nature stanza with sights and sounds. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too. Tania Kitchin March 9, 2023 at 3:39 AM Thank you

Paige Hind March 7, 2023 at 9:28 AM Love the lightheartedness of this! Tania Kitchin March 7, 2023 at 3:52 PM Paige, thank you.

Sotto Poet March 5, 2023 at 4:01 PM This a lovely well-written footle, Tania. Really enjoyed your creation. Congratulations on your win. Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 4:22 PM Lasaad, thank you.

John Lawless March 5, 2023 at 3:22 PM You nailed it Tania.....a spring "Pop-Up" poem, nicely done Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 4:22 PM John, thank you.

Stephan McBride March 5, 2023 at 12:03 PM Very great poem , this is hilarious the way you put this together and choice of words, love it Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 1:35 PM Stephan, thank you.

Daniel Turner March 5, 2023 at 9:58 AM My favorites are "yucky mucky: and "blooms perfumes" "yellow fellow". I like them all but those 3 are my favorites. Thanks for letting me comment on your poem. Have a great Sunday afternoon:) Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 10:05 AM Daniel, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar March 5, 2023 at 8:05 AM You zigzagged amongst nature. Lovely. Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 8:26 AM Victor, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2023 at 6:50 AM ... sound ... smell ... and beauty ... like your play with words, Tania :) - hugs Tania Kitchin March 5, 2023 at 7:40 AM Anne-Lise, thank you, I have fun with these.