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Violins drowned Voices strangled Nightmares invade sanity Under covers of fear I must hide and sleep Even inside darkness I see us both Weep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2020 6:38:00 PM
Love the imagery.. what a beautiful expression of utter devastation.
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Date: 4/30/2018 7:26:00 PM
I can hear the violin weeping
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Date: 4/22/2018 9:46:00 AM
From dream to nightmare, well done Arthur...
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Date: 4/21/2018 6:43:00 PM
No rest for you tonight Art.
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:53:00 PM
this sensitive write shows intense nature, art... i like the last one-- a surprise... huggs
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:34:00 PM
Potent. Spring floods are to be expected, destruction and disaster of the heart however... gorgeous poetry my friend.
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Date: 4/17/2018 9:59:00 AM
Covers give security. Shared security. :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:39:00 AM
deep and sad imagery Arthur, I prefer part 1:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:32:00 AM
I think I like part two even better. :0)
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Date: 4/17/2018 5:15:00 AM
Vivid emotions...impossible to hide...All the best Arthur...
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