John Lawless Poet Limerick

Spring Fling

Spring Fling


In the midst of the instinct to mate
she went sniffing around for a date
and once on the scent
all her energy spent
succumbed to spring’s arduous fate


John G. Lawless
3/4/2015

submitted to – Spring Forward – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Debbie Guzzi

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Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 2:38 PM Great humour John - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 2:16 PM Nicely done, nicely won, John. GREAT meter.

Ilene Bauer March 4, 2015 at 11:04 AM well done! this is a fine limerick...

Eve Roper March 4, 2015 at 10:18 AM A very delightful write, a 7 and good luck on the contest.

Emile Pinet March 4, 2015 at 9:47 AM A fun frolic in the imagination that is humorous nonsense that plays with words and sets us up for a chuckle. Emile.

Janet Eaton March 4, 2015 at 6:36 AM Very cute John. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Janet John Lawless March 4, 2015 at 6:45 AM Thanks Janet for stopping by to comment.