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Spring Fete

Oh, the soft dulcet breeze of early spring, comes in waltzing this sparkling morning. While clear dew drops blink like diamond rings, and singing birds begin their courting The wild flowers on the meadows, start their yearly resurrection, exhibiting their chiffon pedals; Swaying to the warming sun’s reflection The dew covered webs of spiders, looking like lace on the branches, as if they were made from special fibers; while they enjoynew dances Tiny hummingbirds are arriving to pollinate the various flowers. Their trip was arduous but they survived, as spring sends its magic powers

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Date: 2/11/2020 9:03:00 PM
Oh how I long for that magical power called spring my dear poet. Thank you for reminding me tonight, I'm glad I stopped by to read your precious piece. xo
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Date: 2/11/2020 9:21:00 PM
Your poems remind me of what I read some time ago. "Kindness is the oil that takes the friction out of life."
Date: 1/1/2020 12:54:00 AM
Such profound wording and some spectacularly wise thoughts, Masterful.. :)
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Javad.
Date: 8/24/2019 7:06:00 AM
Wow this is one of the most awesome creatively captured version of spring in splendid rhyming . Truly a masterpiece quality poem. Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 11/17/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you zaynab
Date: 4/13/2019 2:24:00 PM
You gave us that celebration of Spring with this most unusual sonnet. I am positive this will renew a number of winter spirits. Good write!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 4/16/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Ediynn!
Date: 3/9/2019 1:04:00 PM
Spring has magic secret powers - plants are revived or reborn and spring birds start arriving at their desired destinations. Lovely poem - very well penned. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 3/10/2019 10:00:00 AM
There are times for everything. Nature has to be forever punctual.
Date: 3/3/2019 5:59:00 AM
Wonderful Sonnet, so many amazing lines that make this poem a gem..
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 3/3/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank youi Harry. Your words mean a lot to me. Thanks for visiting.

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