Spring Fall Transition

stars in silent fear
eyes of the sky seems tears filled ---
proud pregnant dark clouds


24 March 2022
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Your "Spring fall transition" is a wonderful Haiku write. I love the sky/stars. Have a blessed day and week to come...............
Baker Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Powerful poem with emotions intact. Thanks for sharing, Bill
Brul Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 1:26 PM
What a stunning imagery! I love how you use "pregnant clouds".Lovely! A fav for me.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 2:54 PM
excellent ink:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Thank you very much.
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