Spring Dance

chlorophyll greenery, Spring’s
creamery daffodils chock-full of light.
bees alight; honey wings.

violette clematis rife —
the ribbon wraps ‘round my neighbor’s mailbox.
her preserve rocks wildlife.

the southern cottonwood tree
sheds seeds of tumbleweed-like fluff, blowing
in warm wind; swing drifts free.

sights and sounds all around us.
He darkens our world, likewise lights it up
God fills our cups no muss.

the music of the starshine,
the invitation of the moon halo —
romance slow; paintbrush pines.

5/24/2020

the englyn byr cwca is a Welsh form that uses both end and internal rhymes
poem comprised of tercets (from one tercet to infinity) or 3-line stanzas
first line has 7 syllables, second has 10, and third has 6
lines 1 and 3 end rhyme with each other
line 2 rhymes with a syllable somewhere in the middle of the 3
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Blanca Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 8:27 PM
The tiniest dewdrop hanging from a grass blade in the morning is big enough to reflect the sunshine and the blue of the sky. Fair well my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Thanks for the share! Beautiful
Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:10 AM
The cottonwood tree is the only tree I am not allergic too, and I have always adored it. I truly adore your description of it!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Brewer Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 7:32 AM
A tour de force of sophisticated rhyme and form. Regardless of the impressive analysis your poem has immediate delicate appeal. I am very impressed, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Daniel Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Wow! Mind-blowing use of the form, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Thank you, Jo!
One Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Interesting form... I like some of the words in this one... You have a great vocabulary...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Thanks so much! Hope you are doing well!
Leffanta Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 1:35 PM
You missed the magic of cottonwood fluff floating on the wind just in time for birds to snatch it to feather their nests, but otherwise quite delightful. Aloha! Rico
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:54 PM
That’s cool, Rico! Was my first exposure to this fluff! Alohaaahaaha! ;)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Such a fine write Kim, mastering this form so well. Well done! Blessings always,Gordon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 7:02 AM
This is wonderful! Interesting twining feel to each stanza, relishing your way with words. I love love love the cottonwoods. xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Thank you! I just learned about them through my grandson (almost 12). I thought I was seeing fluff from dandelions. So fascinating!
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 2:15 AM
Wow, you sure set the stage, for this gem, Kim. Wow a poem i'll keep in my fav, love your Spring Dance'
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Wolf Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Lush with Spring's imagery,... I really love how you ended this, Kim: 'paintbrush pines.' ~ From the land of postcard sunsets. (Really! Chicago's can be amazing, surprisingly). Smiles, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 8:54 PM
When my son lived in Chicago, they had a huge picture window with fantastic sunlight, plants indoors. Enjoyed! Thanks, Gershon!
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