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Spring Constanza

SPRING CONSTANZA - NOT FOR CONTEST New life arrives in stunning spring When many animals give birth rejuvenating mother earth I love to hear the bluebells ring when I am strolling in the dell zephyr winds carry their sweet smell. Blackbirds open their beaks and sing As they skillfully build their nest They never stop to take a rest Young fledglings grow and take to wing I love to watch their maiden flight It brings me joy and such delight I try hard not to miss a thing As I enjoy the countryside I keep my peepers open wide! New life arrives in stunning spring I love to hear the bluebells ring Blackbirds open their beaks and sing Young fledglings rise and take to wing I try hard not to miss a thing! 07/28/20

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/2/2020 4:30:00 PM

Love all the elements of spring and the return of the birds from the south. The joys of nature that make us smile. Hope all is well your way. We are fine here and wishing this virus would soon end. Take care. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2020 7:37:00 AM

- It has been said many times ... but it is beautiful, Jan :) - A winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/31/2020 7:04:00 AM

This is indeed beautiful, Jan, why are you not entering this??

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/31/2020 1:05:00 AM

This is so lovely Jan. You should enter it. I am putting it into my faves. Blessings xxoo

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/30/2020 1:53:00 PM

are you aware of the talent you possess....in all your work i have read only positivity was addressed....so profound and Beautiful, it only relieves stress....therefore it must be said that this is not a guess....that you my dear jan are one of the best....and in no way is that to take away from all the rest....very Beautiful creative and artistic write jan....;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/30/2020 10:12:00 AM

It's wonderful that you enjoy all spring has to offer, Jan. Your skillful descriptions make it sound like you don't miss a thing in spring. A very beautiful poem, Jan. This goes to my faves. Hugs, carolyn

John Watt

Date: 7/29/2020 6:15:00 PM

You're so right, spring is so stunning, with new life teeming everywhere. Loved your close attention to the birds and flowers, both key elements of spring delight. Beautiful Constanza, my friend, and I wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/29/2020 3:01:00 PM

Hi Jan: I'm still alive, fighting the virus. Your poem is as the song of spring heralding on the Isle of Man

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/29/2020 3:00:00 PM

Hi Jan: I'm still alive, fighting the virus. Your poem is as a the song of spring heralding on the Isle of Man

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/29/2020 2:24:00 PM

Open eyes from an open heart, Jan. Such a lovely portrait of spring! Thank you for sharing your vision!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/28/2020 11:06:00 PM

G'day Jan ... the sights, sounds, and smells of spring make us feel better and you described this beautifully Jan - Lindsay

Michael Tor

Date: 7/28/2020 9:11:00 PM

Love natures beauty that is all around us to enjoy in this wonderful piece Jan xoxo

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/28/2020 8:47:00 PM

Someone said this poem is an absolute delight, and I totally agree with them.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/28/2020 4:09:00 PM

A lovely melody to your write...I like it...Hope to see it next year...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 4:46:00 PM

thanks Arturo I adore seeing the little lambs in the fields and the bright colours of the flowers:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 7/28/2020 3:46:00 PM

Jan, Part of your poetic genius is to make creating a poem look easy. That truism is readily apparent in this little gem. Reading "Constanza" tempts a person to say, "Hey, I can do that." OK, so go right ahead and do it (smile). * * * Great work, Jan. I love it. Hugs, Paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 4:44:00 PM

you are a real sweetheart Paul , I've written on this theme several times and find my poem rather dull and boring so have entered an old poem which is much more of a fun write in an attempt to lure my muse out of hiding:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/28/2020 3:34:00 PM

Jan, this poem is an absolute DELIGHT! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 4:42:00 PM

thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 7/28/2020 2:40:00 PM

I love the view of spring through your peepers my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 4:41:00 PM

thanks Mark i am taking a risk in the contest and entering an old poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2020 1:15:00 PM

You captured spring so well in your verse Jan, this spring has been strange with lockdown, hopefully next spring will be better. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 1:19:00 PM

yes ... but hasn't the weather been amazing - lock down would have been even more difficult if we had been stuck in doors for weeks with rainy weather:-( hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/28/2020 12:47:00 PM

You DID notice that, unlike God, the birds don't take a day of rest! WELL DONE! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 1:04:00 PM

lol thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/28/2020 11:46:00 AM

WoW! Jan, The picture you painted with words is just breathtaking! It looks amazing. I love the spring season.Great job.Why aren’t you entering this gem into the contest? :-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 11:51:00 AM

I had written similar themed poems so I have taken a chance and entered an older poem:-) so glad to see you back on soup have missed you:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/28/2020 11:37:00 AM

Spring beauty a pleasant feeling to all.. nicely written, great theme, flow, and rhyme. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2020 11:50:00 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx