Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Spring Constanza

SPRING CONSTANZA - NOT FOR CONTEST

New life arrives in stunning spring
When many animals give birth
rejuvenating mother earth 

I love to hear the bluebells ring
when I am strolling in the dell
zephyr winds carry their sweet smell.

Blackbirds open their beaks and sing
As they skillfully build their nest
They never stop to take a rest

Young fledglings grow and take to wing
I love to watch their maiden flight
It brings me joy and such delight

I try hard not to miss a thing
As I enjoy the countryside
I keep my peepers open wide!

New life arrives in stunning spring
I love to hear the bluebells ring
Blackbirds open their beaks and sing
Young fledglings rise and take to wing
I try hard not to miss a thing!


07/28/20

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Phyllis Babcock August 2, 2020 at 4:30 PM Love all the elements of spring and the return of the birds from the south. The joys of nature that make us smile. Hope all is well your way. We are fine here and wishing this virus would soon end. Take care. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2020 at 7:37 AM - It has been said many times ... but it is beautiful, Jan :) - A winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel July 31, 2020 at 7:04 AM This is indeed beautiful, Jan, why are you not entering this??

Connie Marcum Wong July 31, 2020 at 1:05 AM This is so lovely Jan. You should enter it. I am putting it into my faves. Blessings xxoo

Eric Boddie July 30, 2020 at 1:53 PM are you aware of the talent you possess....in all your work i have read only positivity was addressed....so profound and Beautiful, it only relieves stress....therefore it must be said that this is not a guess....that you my dear jan are one of the best....and in no way is that to take away from all the rest....very Beautiful creative and artistic write jan....;)

Carolyn Devonshire July 30, 2020 at 10:12 AM It's wonderful that you enjoy all spring has to offer, Jan. Your skillful descriptions make it sound like you don't miss a thing in spring. A very beautiful poem, Jan. This goes to my faves. Hugs, carolyn

John Watt July 29, 2020 at 6:15 PM You're so right, spring is so stunning, with new life teeming everywhere. Loved your close attention to the birds and flowers, both key elements of spring delight. Beautiful Constanza, my friend, and I wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Ralph Sergi July 29, 2020 at 3:01 PM Hi Jan: I'm still alive, fighting the virus. Your poem is as the song of spring heralding on the Isle of Man

Ralph Sergi July 29, 2020 at 3:00 PM Hi Jan: I'm still alive, fighting the virus. Your poem is as a the song of spring heralding on the Isle of Man

Sam Kauffman July 29, 2020 at 2:24 PM Open eyes from an open heart, Jan. Such a lovely portrait of spring! Thank you for sharing your vision!

Lindsay Laurie July 28, 2020 at 11:06 PM G'day Jan ... the sights, sounds, and smells of spring make us feel better and you described this beautifully Jan - Lindsay

Michael Tor July 28, 2020 at 9:11 PM Love natures beauty that is all around us to enjoy in this wonderful piece Jan xoxo

Paghunda Zahid July 28, 2020 at 8:47 PM Someone said this poem is an absolute delight, and I totally agree with them.

Arturo Michael July 28, 2020 at 4:09 PM A lovely melody to your write...I like it...Hope to see it next year... Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 4:46 PM thanks Arturo I adore seeing the little lambs in the fields and the bright colours of the flowers:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter July 28, 2020 at 3:46 PM Jan, Part of your poetic genius is to make creating a poem look easy. That truism is readily apparent in this little gem. Reading "Constanza" tempts a person to say, "Hey, I can do that." OK, so go right ahead and do it (smile). * * * Great work, Jan. I love it. Hugs, Paul Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 4:44 PM you are a real sweetheart Paul , I've written on this theme several times and find my poem rather dull and boring so have entered an old poem which is much more of a fun write in an attempt to lure my muse out of hiding:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy July 28, 2020 at 3:34 PM Jan, this poem is an absolute DELIGHT! Janice Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 4:42 PM thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin July 28, 2020 at 2:40 PM I love the view of spring through your peepers my friend! Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 4:41 PM thanks Mark i am taking a risk in the contest and entering an old poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham July 28, 2020 at 1:15 PM You captured spring so well in your verse Jan, this spring has been strange with lockdown, hopefully next spring will be better. Tom Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 1:19 PM yes ... but hasn't the weather been amazing - lock down would have been even more difficult if we had been stuck in doors for weeks with rainy weather:-( hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta July 28, 2020 at 12:47 PM You DID notice that, unlike God, the birds don't take a day of rest! WELL DONE! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 1:04 PM lol thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. July 28, 2020 at 11:46 AM WoW! Jan, The picture you painted with words is just breathtaking! It looks amazing. I love the spring season.Great job.Why aren’t you entering this gem into the contest? :-) Alexis Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 11:51 AM I had written similar themed poems so I have taken a chance and entered an older poem:-) so glad to see you back on soup have missed you:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper July 28, 2020 at 11:37 AM Spring beauty a pleasant feeling to all.. nicely written, great theme, flow, and rhyme. Hugs Eve Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 11:50 AM thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx