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Spring comes alive

Ah Sweet Spring The land comes alive once more with glorious blooms of all colours just look at the shore Full of flowers that love the salt breezes They dip and frolic flirting away joyously The hills are ablaze with wild flowers so sweetly scented wafting it down to us we surrounding all with heavenly aroma basking us letting us know we are alive Lush grasses grow to give us sweet hay allowing us to take care of our stock animals trees full of vibrant leaves of greens with birds in their midst singing with joy Feel the hot rush of blood as you stroll by passions rising as all seek a mate to love and continue to multiply forming new families to go forth and enjoy all the spring bounties.

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Date: 4/11/2024 2:19:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Spring write. It is a great time of the year. I wish it would last longer with the pretty flowers...  Have a fun Spring day writing away.................
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Date: 4/6/2024 8:26:00 AM
Hey Shadow, I hope you are well.. Your poem is a delightful ode to the season of renewal, where the land bursts forth with an explosion of color and vitality. The imagery of glorious blooms adorning the shores, wildflowers ablaze on the hills, and lush grasses providing nourishment paints a vivid picture of nature's resplendence.
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Date: 4/6/2024 2:38:00 PM
hi SO pleased you like it Hugs Shadow soup mail
Date: 4/5/2024 6:56:00 PM
Dear Shadow, a passionate tribute to spring and nature's beauty. It depicts blossoming flowers, green grasslands, brilliant foliage, and the bustling activities of critters and birds to capture the magic of this season. Words like "magnificent blooms," "delicately fragrant," "resplendent leaves," and "a surge of warmth flowing through our veins" provide a beautiful picture of spring in the poem. The poem is cheerful due to flowers "flirting," meadows "yielding sweet hay," and birds "singing with unabashed elation". Alliteration in "dance and revel" and "lush grasses luxuriously flourish" enhances the poem's melody.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2024 2:36:00 PM
hi Sotto ntcu ty for reading my poem and saying such nice thing about it hugs Shadow

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