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gray spider web waves will white wind whisk it away insect dream crushed by maid

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Date: 2/8/2024 2:53:00 PM
kind of a Haiku...fun to watch a spider making a web..I like calling the white wind a 'maid.' Brilliant.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/8/2024 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 2/8/2024 1:57:00 AM
Loved your haiku. Great ending.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/8/2024 2:00:00 AM
Thanks Victor. Was unsure if it is haiku or the other one about people

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