Spring Bud

My 
                               breath
                          shivers under  
                       a rug of loneliness,
                    a sleepy heart huddles
                   against such memories 
                 of togetherness and not of 
               goodbyes, hating to disperse 
               the fiery rhymes of your lips, 
                as well as the warmth of its 
                 sweat...tastes like red wine, 
                   then it beats...and beats
                     gently, as it envisions
                          you, in an early
                                misty
                                   s
                                  p
                                r
                               i
                              n
                            g

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 3/25/2017 12:25:00 PM
This was just lovely. I had too many favorite lines so I'll just say it was all beautiful!
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Date: 2/11/2017 1:21:00 PM
How romantic and beautifully crafted!
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:57:00 AM
Beautifully written and very interesting arrangement.
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:13:00 PM
A jewel! Light & Love
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Date: 5/29/2009 7:04:00 PM
love this one!! impressive.... take care! _chily_
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Date: 5/29/2009 3:05:00 PM
Love this -Congratulations for sharing it...The Keeper
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Date: 5/29/2009 2:10:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 5/26/2009 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ernesto. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/25/2009 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on this winning poem being re-featured. Creative write. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Ernesto Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:59:00 AM
Hello Mr. Poet, very nice rose bud. Congratulations on this featured piece. Ernilando
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Date: 9/9/2008 3:07:00 PM
great write!
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Date: 8/6/2008 1:39:00 AM
Bravo!!! really worthy of first place...i am very proud of you my "long lost brother" John E
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Date: 7/26/2008 10:14:00 AM
excellence
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Date: 7/15/2008 10:03:00 PM
congrats ernesto... it's cool.. i admire people who can do poems as good as your poems... love it... ___amour___
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