Spring Bud

My 
                               breath
                          shivers under  
                       a rug of loneliness,
                    a sleepy heart huddles
                   against such memories 
                 of togetherness and not of 
               goodbyes, hating to disperse 
               the fiery rhymes of your lips, 
                as well as the warmth of its 
                 sweat...tastes like red wine, 
                   then it beats...and beats
                     gently, as it envisions
                          you, in an early
                                misty
                                   s
                                  p
                                r
                               i
                              n
                            g
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Rodd Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:25 PM
This was just lovely. I had too many favorite lines so I'll just say it was all beautiful!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 1:21 PM
How romantic and beautifully crafted!
Green Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Beautifully written and very interesting arrangement.
Guzzi Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 2:13 PM
A jewel! Light & Love
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May 29, 2009 at 7:04 PM
love this one!! impressive.... take care! _chily_
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May 29, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Love this -Congratulations for sharing it...The Keeper
Ahmad Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 2:10 PM
Congrats!
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 3:41 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ernesto. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Congrats on your winning poem being featured this week! Love, Shar
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May 25, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Congrats on this winning poem being re-featured. Creative write. Vince
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May 25, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Ernesto Rgds Brian
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May 25, 2009 at 12:59 AM
Hello Mr. Poet, very nice rose bud. Congratulations on this featured piece. Ernilando
Fry Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 3:07 PM
great write!
Boak Avatar
August 6, 2008 at 1:39 AM
Bravo!!! really worthy of first place...i am very proud of you my "long lost brother" John E
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July 26, 2008 at 10:14 AM
excellence
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July 15, 2008 at 10:03 PM
congrats ernesto... it's cool.. i admire people who can do poems as good as your poems... love it... ___amour___
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