Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Spring Breeze

The rain came and chased the snow
Snow said... why did you come today?
Rain gleefully replies
To take your coat of white
My layers are thick, winter is half done
Why not see spring to have your fun?
Rain tried hard to grab the coat
It was heavy and did not float
Snow smiled and knowing said
Dry your misty eyes
My coat of white will soon be replaced
Hang those tears upon the trees
I will keep them safe for the spring breeze.


08/02/16

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Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2016 at 8:04 PM I REAlly like this one. the most unique of them that i've seen so far.

Connie Marcum Wong February 15, 2016 at 11:31 PM I feel for you Phyllis. I went through two months of bronchitis in Sep. / Nov. Take care my friend and get well soon. Hugs, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong February 9, 2016 at 10:53 AM This is so sweet Phyllis. Hope you and your husband are over the virus. I had it in Sept. and the coughing lasted two months so I feel for you my friend. Cheers, Connie Phyllis Babcock February 14, 2016 at 10:56 AM Thanks Connie. It has been a long 12 weeks getting over this virus.We are on the mend. Thanks for your comment. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2016 at 2:51 PM - Wonderful written, dear Phyllis - Rain, snow, rain, snow .... this whole winter ... we have to wait a while for the spring - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock February 14, 2016 at 10:58 AM Thank you my friend and yes patiently awaiting spring. love phyl