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Spring Brake

What a grate dey it is Sonny whether and awl Let's wring in Spring Brake Thyme for fun, half a bawl. Cum on, let's get aweigh and lei on the beech reed books by the serf sea and bee scene. Wheel watch waives bye the peer Whet hour feat and hour tows Ewe just mite meat Mr. Write Theirs a chants, who nose? Written on 3/23/2015

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Archana Garg

Date: 5/3/2015 9:33:00 AM

Enjoyed a lot. congrats on your great win.... Archana

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2015 3:18:00 PM

Thank you very much, Archana. Glad you enjoyed it:)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/2/2015 12:46:00 PM

Hi Laura: Grate poem!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/2/2015 1:26:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph. Glad ewe liked it :)

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2015 11:40:00 PM

yes this is awesome..........SKAT

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/2/2015 1:26:00 PM

Thanks, Skat A! It was a fun one :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2015 5:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Laura, a 7. Blessings and hugs eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/2/2015 1:27:00 PM

Thanks, Eve! You are kind to give me this rating :) It was a fun write !

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2015 1:25:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/1/2015 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, and back attcha!! :)

Judy Konos

Date: 5/1/2015 1:19:00 PM

LOL a crackin up kind of poem...

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/1/2015 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Judy! I enjoyed the fun of using homophones, which lends itself to humor, I think :)

Tammy Reams

Date: 5/1/2015 7:29:00 AM

Great write Laura! Congrats on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/1/2015 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Tammy! it was fun to write it, too :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/1/2015 7:27:00 AM

I missed seeing this before, Laura, but what a great job you did here, and rhyming too! Congratulations on your 3rd Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/1/2015 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra! Your second place poem was awesome, as well :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2015 8:19:00 AM

Purrrfect!

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/26/2015 12:28:00 AM

So grate ewe liked it! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 7:49:00 AM

Its a challenge to write for this contest - this made me smile:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/26/2015 12:29:00 AM

Yours was grate, to, Jan ;)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/23/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thanks, John! Your kind comment Id appreciated :)

John Fleming

Date: 3/23/2015 3:27:00 PM

I find this poem all so very charming, Laura - Very well done! It has a north-east sort of Geordie dialect to it...Excellent!! My very best regards!! :) john. P.s A seven!!

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/23/2015 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, John. Glad you enjoyed it! :)