Laura Leiser Poet Light Verse

Spring Brake

What a grate dey it is
Sonny whether and awl
Let's wring in Spring Brake   
Thyme for fun, half a bawl.  

Cum on, let's get aweigh
and lei on the beech
reed books by the serf
sea and bee scene.

Wheel watch waives bye the peer
Whet hour feat and hour tows
Ewe just mite meat Mr. Write
Theirs a chants, who nose?

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Archana Garg May 3, 2015 at 9:33 AM Enjoyed a lot. congrats on your great win.... Archana Laura Leiser May 3, 2015 at 3:18 PM Thank you very much, Archana. Glad you enjoyed it:)

Ralph Sergi May 2, 2015 at 12:46 PM Hi Laura: Grate poem! Laura Leiser May 2, 2015 at 1:26 PM Thanks, Ralph. Glad ewe liked it :)

Skat A May 1, 2015 at 11:40 PM yes this is awesome..........SKAT Laura Leiser May 2, 2015 at 1:26 PM Thanks, Skat A! It was a fun one :)

Eve Roper May 1, 2015 at 5:49 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win Laura, a 7. Blessings and hugs eve Laura Leiser May 2, 2015 at 1:27 PM Thanks, Eve! You are kind to give me this rating :) It was a fun write !

Jan Allison May 1, 2015 at 1:25 PM Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) Hugs jan xx Laura Leiser May 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM Thanks, Jan, and back attcha!! :)

Judy Konos May 1, 2015 at 1:19 PM LOL a crackin up kind of poem... Laura Leiser May 1, 2015 at 5:00 PM Thank you, Judy! I enjoyed the fun of using homophones, which lends itself to humor, I think :)

Tammy Reams May 1, 2015 at 7:29 AM Great write Laura! Congrats on your win! Laura Leiser May 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM Thanks, Tammy! it was fun to write it, too :)

Sandra Haight May 1, 2015 at 7:27 AM I missed seeing this before, Laura, but what a great job you did here, and rhyming too! Congratulations on your 3rd Place win! Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser May 1, 2015 at 4:58 PM Thanks, Sandra! Your second place poem was awesome, as well :)

Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2015 at 8:19 AM Purrrfect! Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 12:28 AM So grate ewe liked it! :)

Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 7:49 AM Its a challenge to write for this contest - this made me smile:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 12:29 AM Yours was grate, to, Jan ;)

Laura Leiser March 23, 2015 at 3:43 PM Thanks, John! Your kind comment Id appreciated :)

John Fleming March 23, 2015 at 3:27 PM I find this poem all so very charming, Laura - Very well done! It has a north-east sort of Geordie dialect to it...Excellent!! My very best regards!! :) john. P.s A seven!! Laura Leiser March 23, 2015 at 5:00 PM Thanks, John. Glad you enjoyed it! :)