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shy crimson blossoms tickled by morning's cool breath ~ puff their rosy cheeks




~ 1st Place ~  in the "Monoku 4: Colours" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor.

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Kim Rodrigues

January 23, 2018 at 10:55 AM

An interweaving of lovely words, Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 27, 2018 at 4:44 PM

Very sweet of you, Kim - thank you so much, Friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2018 at 8:38 PM

This is such a precious picture. Adorable! You got to go the head of the class in this contest and I was on the bottom. haha!!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 10, 2018 at 11:21 PM

You are very kind to me, Andrea, and your opinion is very important ... so pleased you enjoyed this one, friend! :-) <3

Anisha Dutta

January 5, 2018 at 12:09 PM

Pretty pleasant. Congrats to win. Happy New Year

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:41 PM

Happy New Year, Anisha, and thank you so much! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

January 5, 2018 at 11:41 AM

This is a superior Monoku Greg, and I see why it took top honors. Congratulations! : )

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:40 PM

Thank you very much, Connie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it, friend ... blessings to you! :-) <3

Sandra Haight

January 5, 2018 at 9:03 AM

An outstanding Monoku with fine imagery, Gregory. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:40 PM

That's very kind of you, Sandra, and I greatly appreciate the fine comments! Blessings, my friend! :-)

Rhoda Tripp

January 5, 2018 at 4:38 AM

Ohhhh, another great write, Gregory. Love these words. A beautiful scene created by few words. Congratulations on your win!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:47 AM

Thank you very much, Rhoda ... that's so kind of you to say! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Probir Gupta

January 4, 2018 at 11:32 PM

Handsome blush in the Monoku ... Congratulations for the beautiful win, Greg ..

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:46 AM

Thank you so very much, Probir - blessings and Happy New Year, friend! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

January 4, 2018 at 11:22 PM

Congratulations, Greg on fine win. A wonderful imagery.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:45 AM

I'm pleased you liked it, Subimal - many kind thanks to you, Friend! :-)

Riley Hood

January 4, 2018 at 11:14 PM

Beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win! :)

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:45 AM

Very kind of you, Riley, I thank you so much! :-)

Sathya Babu

January 4, 2018 at 9:44 PM

Beautiful !!! Regards, Sathya

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:44 AM

Thanks so much, Sathya - blessings, friend! :-)

Susan Ashley

January 4, 2018 at 9:26 PM

Lovely personification Gregory. Beautiful monoku.. Congratulations for your fantastic win.. ~Susan

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:44 AM

Very sweet of you to say so, Susan, and I greatly appreciate the comments ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Mick Talbot

January 4, 2018 at 2:27 PM

Gregory, congratulations on your win... Mick

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:43 AM

Thank you very much, Mick! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 4, 2018 at 12:28 PM

- Hi Gregory, congratulations on your beautiful winning line :) - // Sun :)

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:42 AM

Very kind of you, Sun - thanks so much! :-) <3

Charlie Smith

January 4, 2018 at 11:15 AM

Beautiful Gregory, congratulations...

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:42 AM

Thanks so much, Charlie, I appreciate that, friend! :-)

Line Gauthier

January 4, 2018 at 10:51 AM

Lovely! Awesome for a perfect win. Well done, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:41 AM

That's sweet of you, Line, and such a kind comment - thank you! :-) <3

Beautiful Scars

January 4, 2018 at 9:35 AM

So beautiful! -luloo

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:41 AM

Much appreciated, Luloo! <3

Judith S

January 4, 2018 at 8:45 AM

Back with Congrats Greg!!!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:41 AM

Thank you, Dear Judy! <3

Paul Callus

January 4, 2018 at 8:37 AM

A very lovely personification, Gregory! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:40 AM

Thank you very much, Paul - so appreciated!

Sneha Rv

January 4, 2018 at 8:15 AM

This is so sweet, what unique imagery - congratulations on your win! :)

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:40 AM

Thank you very much, Sneha - I'm pleased you enjoyed it, friend! :-) <3

Silent One

January 4, 2018 at 7:37 AM

I know some shy crimson blossoms.... Nice one Greg... Congratulations on your first place in the colours monoku contest

Gregory Richard Barden

January 5, 2018 at 4:40 AM

Very kind of you, S1 - I'm honored to place so high with such amazing poets!

David Mohn

January 2, 2018 at 9:05 PM

best I've seen Greg...stunning!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:56 AM

I SO appreciate that wonderful comment, David, thank you very much, my friend! :-)

Pandita Sietesantos

January 2, 2018 at 8:23 PM

So beautifully written with incredible imagery! This is definitely a winner! Bravo, Greg! Good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:55 AM

Blessings and thanks to you, Pandita, for your very kind words ... I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

January 2, 2018 at 2:28 PM

A visual delight with glowing imagery that comes alive with your words Greg! : )

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:54 AM

I'm very pleased that you liked my little poem, Connie - thanks so much for the kindness, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3

CayCay Godwin

January 2, 2018 at 10:23 AM

Absolutely delightful, you wrote a beauty, Gregory! All the best ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:53 AM

Thank you, My Poet Friend, that's very kind of you - blessings and Happy New Year, CayCay! :-) <3

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 8:55 AM

Surely a winner Greg!! This is beautiful!!

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:52 AM

That's sweet of you, Judy - I hope you're right, but either way it's already a winner ... cuz YOU liked it! ;-) <3

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