Spring Blooms

plum blossoms' brilliance
pink carpet on rugged hills
petals in the air 




30 March 2021
For " Spring-Traditional Haiku Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
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George Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 8:17 AM
I am sure you have written this beautiful haiku on witnessing the cherry blossoms that spread a pink carpet below ! Lovely !
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:21 PM
"Pink carpet on rugged hill..." Thank you for letting me see contrast of nature in its glory and unsharpened ways.
Canerdy Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:06 PM
Lovely haiku, JCB! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 11:04 AM
The energy and joy of spring so wonderfully captured in your lovely haiku JCB! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy to you!
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Still loving the imagery here and back with my congrats.
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 12:23 PM
many congrats on your win JCB this is so delightful:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Your haiku paints a pretty picture! congrats on your win, JCB! blessings, Kim M
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your bronze placement with your lovely haiku!
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 1:25 PM
So very pretty!
Mcintosh Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Love this. God bless you with love, Gina
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