Notes About The Poem
I painted myself into a corner with this one with the choice of words..I left it for maybe a lesson in what not to do..I was thinking of what baby birds look like at first coming out of the egg..A creature that only a mother can see potential..Sara
Spring Birds
Tiny
Whiny
Shiny
Veiny
In spring birds have tiny whiny child
With skin that is shiny veiny mild
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