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Spring Awakens

Bears and bats awake out of winter's slumber Birds are nesting, squirrels in the trees are feeding Hills and valleys brighten with vibrant colors Stanzas of springtime Written on 3/16/2015 Sapphic Stanza

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2015 4:40:00 PM

GOOD one and that last line is really cool. Stanzas of springtime Wow!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/7/2015 8:40:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! I appreciate your kind comment:)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 5/7/2015 12:40:00 AM

Wow, this was well imagined, and then pictures were well crafted, i enjoyed reading this poem, even was picturing i, watching those animals, hehehe Congs, Bryan, Hugs

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 5/7/2015 11:52:00 PM

I do embrace your gratitude Laura. Always pass by to read my poems. Hugs,

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/7/2015 8:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bryon! I really appreciate that you enjoy my poem :) it was challenging, but fun, too!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2015 2:02:00 PM

Your first attempt was brilliant mine is still unfinished lol

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, for your encouraging comments. I appreciate it!

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:49:00 AM

Laura. Congrats on the win. SKAT LOVE

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 2:45:00 PM

Thanks, Skat! You are too kind :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:04:00 AM

Laura:) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thanks, PDA!! Are your and Skat A sisters? I saw a comment and was wondering if it is so?! Take care :)

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/6/2015 8:18:00 AM

Your first attempt at this form and you placed! Congrats Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Rob! You are kind to comment, and I appreciate it very much :)

Vincent Flannery

Date: 3/17/2015 6:15:00 AM

Nicely written Laura, so glad that Spring is near. Best wishes in the contest.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2015 9:57:00 AM

Thank you, Vincent. I appreciate your kind comments:)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2015 12:48:00 AM

I'm no expert, but I think you did a great job with this difficult form...very lovely imagery, too...hugs, Rhonda

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2015 9:56:00 AM

I hope it's right, Rhonda! Thanks for your comments:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2015 1:45:00 PM

- Sleep away snow and winter ... wake up to beautiful spring .... maybe I should have been a bear or a bat :) - Lovely poem Laura ! - I wish you best of luck in contest !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/16/2015 1:48:00 PM

Thank you, Anne Lise! This is my first attempt at this difficult form of poetry. I hope I did it right! Thanks again for commenting :)