Spring arrived
With spring,
Yaoshang Festival arrived,
In the festive mood,
youngsters rejoiced
in joyous moments.
The atmosphere was filled
with laughter .
From an ajar window
a dark skinned maid watched,
her heart itching,
as the girls laughed .
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