Spring and You

Lying in a verdant spring field,
scents of fruit and roses permeate the air;
thoughts of you are never far.
They caress like the sun's warm rays,
bringing a suffusion of joy to my heart.

The hum of occasional automobiles
blend with the drone of honey bees
lulling my senses like a Gregorian chant
in an Austrian monastery.

You and nature have become 
my tenants of religion,
calming my restless spirit;
soothing my soul, 
until I am a placid lake
soaking in all that is you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Castellenas Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Wonderful use of words. I am waiting for Spring in Michigan. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:12 AM
Janet, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 2:48 AM
spring as lovely as this enchants.. big congrats, janet.
Cervenka Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Thank you 'Nette! ~Jan
Carmack Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 6:03 AM
I see below you were looking for a contest for this fine poem. I am glad you chose mine. Congrats.
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Rob. As a fairly newby to the site it was fun to enter. I'm happy with the placement. There are some awesome writers on this site.
Deschler Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 8:26 PM
A lovely poem that delights the reader's senses... Very nicely written, Janet! Congrats on your win!
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Thanks so much Kelly! I appreciate that you took the time to take a look. ~Jan
Yvonne Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 10:59 AM
A very beautiful well written poem of love. It is very pleasing to the ears and a wonderful read.
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:26 PM
Thanks you Armond.
Yvonne Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Oops, sorry, forgot to add you to my fav poet list. Problem corrected.
Cervenka Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Quite an honor!
Sadig El Waad Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 10:16 AM
inspiring this kind of love, for it blends the body and the soul. Humbly incline before this great poem!
Cervenka Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Jaafar.
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 9:50 PM
This is really a beauty my dear friend, Jan. It gives a calming and soothing feeling to the readers. I love it so much! Excellent poem! Thanks a lot for sharing. May I also take this chance to thank you for your precious time reading and commenting on my work. Nice to meet you. God bless. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Cervenka Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Thanks. Hope to read more of your work soon. ~Jan
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:06 PM
truly a poetic gem shimmering with incredible impressions.. wow, janet.. divine!.. huggs
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Nette, thanks for the comment and hugs. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~jan =-)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 1:07 PM
A majestic ride Janet.... enjoyed the ride very much! Keith:-)
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Thanks Keith for reading and leaving the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed my rendition. ;-) ~jan
Martin Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Have been looking most o your work and all are impressive with their heartfelt feelings and wonderful word usage, particulary this one.
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:46 PM
There is a plethora of words to be had, why use the same ones? Although I must confess that every once in a while one gets caught rattling around in my head, and it shows up in several of my poems of the moment.
Bolton Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Such poetical thoughts and phrasing withing this wonderful life-sharing poetry. Spring! Yesssss . . . A wonderful time in the cycle of life. Add to that the mystery and contentment of love and you have something very nearly perfect.
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Jerry, there is nothing quite like the peace of sitting in a warm spring sun and letting your thoughts drift to the one you love. Spring has put the warm fuzzies into my writing! =-) ~jan
Austin Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Wonderfully sophisticated write, constantly delicious. Love, daver
Austin Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:21 AM
No thanks needed. It was a pleasure to read such good poetry. How about reading some of my stuff. Love, daver
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Daver! And now I'm hungry after your use of "delicious" ;-)
Lovely Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:11 AM
I love this poem! It beautifully pictures the elements of spring in the reader's mind perfectly. I don't know what to say other than I love it! Is this possibly for the spring contest? Hugs, Angelica :3
Cervenka Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Thanks you so much. I'm glad, because this is one I really like,too. (Is it okay to say you like your own work?) It was not written for a contest, but I will look and see if it fits any categories. I love the peace and contentment of spring! Hugs. ~jan
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