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Spring and You

Lying in a verdant spring field, scents of fruit and roses permeate the air; thoughts of you are never far. They caress like the sun's warm rays, bringing a suffusion of joy to my heart. The hum of occasional automobiles blend with the drone of honey bees lulling my senses like a Gregorian chant in an Austrian monastery. You and nature have become my tenants of religion, calming my restless spirit; soothing my soul, until I am a placid lake soaking in all that is you.

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John Castellenas

Date: 3/5/2019 10:33:00 AM

Wonderful use of words. I am waiting for Spring in Michigan. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 3:12:00 AM

Janet, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2015 2:48:00 AM

spring as lovely as this enchants.. big congrats, janet.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/9/2015 8:06:00 AM

Thank you 'Nette! ~Jan

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/8/2015 6:03:00 AM

I see below you were looking for a contest for this fine poem. I am glad you chose mine. Congrats.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Rob. As a fairly newby to the site it was fun to enter. I'm happy with the placement. There are some awesome writers on this site.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2015 8:26:00 PM

A lovely poem that delights the reader's senses... Very nicely written, Janet! Congrats on your win!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Kelly! I appreciate that you took the time to take a look. ~Jan

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/1/2015 10:59:00 AM

A very beautiful well written poem of love. It is very pleasing to the ears and a wonderful read.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 12:26:00 PM

Thanks you Armond.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/1/2015 10:55:00 AM

Oops, sorry, forgot to add you to my fav poet list. Problem corrected.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/1/2015 1:26:00 PM

Quite an honor!

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 3/26/2015 10:16:00 AM

inspiring this kind of love, for it blends the body and the soul. Humbly incline before this great poem!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/26/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Jaafar.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/25/2015 9:50:00 PM

This is really a beauty my dear friend, Jan. It gives a calming and soothing feeling to the readers. I love it so much! Excellent poem! Thanks a lot for sharing. May I also take this chance to thank you for your precious time reading and commenting on my work. Nice to meet you. God bless. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/26/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thanks. Hope to read more of your work soon. ~Jan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2015 2:06:00 PM

truly a poetic gem shimmering with incredible impressions.. wow, janet.. divine!.. huggs

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 2:23:00 PM

Nette, thanks for the comment and hugs. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~jan =-)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/24/2015 1:07:00 PM

A majestic ride Janet.... enjoyed the ride very much! Keith:-)

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Keith for reading and leaving the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed my rendition. ;-) ~jan

Thomas Martin

Date: 3/24/2015 12:34:00 PM

Have been looking most o your work and all are impressive with their heartfelt feelings and wonderful word usage, particulary this one.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 12:46:00 PM

There is a plethora of words to be had, why use the same ones? Although I must confess that every once in a while one gets caught rattling around in my head, and it shows up in several of my poems of the moment.

Jerry Bolton

Date: 3/24/2015 10:36:00 AM

Such poetical thoughts and phrasing withing this wonderful life-sharing poetry. Spring! Yesssss . . . A wonderful time in the cycle of life. Add to that the mystery and contentment of love and you have something very nearly perfect.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 10:57:00 AM

Jerry, there is nothing quite like the peace of sitting in a warm spring sun and letting your thoughts drift to the one you love. Spring has put the warm fuzzies into my writing! =-) ~jan

Daver Austin

Date: 3/24/2015 9:38:00 AM

Wonderfully sophisticated write, constantly delicious. Love, daver

Daver Austin
Date: 3/26/2015 9:21:00 AM

No thanks needed. It was a pleasure to read such good poetry. How about reading some of my stuff. Love, daver

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Daver! And now I'm hungry after your use of "delicious" ;-)

Brie Lovely

Date: 3/24/2015 6:11:00 AM

I love this poem! It beautifully pictures the elements of spring in the reader's mind perfectly. I don't know what to say other than I love it! Is this possibly for the spring contest? Hugs, Angelica :3

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/24/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thanks you so much. I'm glad, because this is one I really like,too. (Is it okay to say you like your own work?) It was not written for a contest, but I will look and see if it fits any categories. I love the peace and contentment of spring! Hugs. ~jan