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Spring Ahead of Schedule

Blossoms bright orange, gold and yellow Planted bulbs rebirth anticipation Robin red breast around fifty on the lawn Robin pecking in the fresh turned soil, mellow Credit card ordered more and more for satisfaction Bills pile higher across my desk, collector on the phone Spring is ahead of schedule until the great freeze Spring is ahead of schedule until Easter.....If you please!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 8:56:00 AM
utterly beautiful Doris ..want to get lost in the beauty of this visual pleasance luv.. Spring has sprung here in Italy.. we hardly had winter at all ..
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:50:00 PM
You have described the coming of spring very well in the lines you have displayed in this work. However, adding the two lines describing your credit card bills and collection agencies over the phone is similar to putting ketchup on a banana split. Perhaps you could have used those two lines to begin a new poem.
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:30:00 PM
Stop ordering and come get some free ones from my yard..Yes, I had to turn the air conditioning on today..I was too hot..Thanks for stopping by my work and my home..Enjoyed sharing Karter's love..Mom
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