Vermillion Scythe Poet Free verse

Spring

Spring
is a green festival
where floral scents emanate, calming the atmosphere
dancing under cherry blossom trees
catching every petal that drops
picking out peaches and oranges
and enjoying the freedom being outside

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Gregory Richard Barden November 29, 2017 at 1:30 AM Very nice - I like the form and this is a charming and whimsical write! (I think you mean "petal" ;-) ) Vermillion Scythe November 29, 2017 at 1:38 AM Thank you for the correction. Now all of the words are properly placed.

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2017 at 2:51 PM this is a lovely example you gave us of your form, Vermillion! i think your challenge form for us is descriptive and awesome. Vermillion Scythe November 27, 2017 at 8:57 PM Thank you for your kind words. I am also trying to invent new forms of poetry and Word Vision is my favorite one.

CayCay Godwin November 25, 2017 at 3:44 AM Really enjoyed the feel in your write. All the best ... CayCay Vermillion Scythe November 25, 2017 at 4:34 AM Thank you.