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Spring

Spring is a green festival where floral scents emanate, calming the atmosphere dancing under cherry blossom trees catching every petal that drops picking out peaches and oranges and enjoying the freedom being outside

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/29/2017 1:30:00 AM

Very nice - I like the form and this is a charming and whimsical write! (I think you mean "petal" ;-) )

Vermillion Scythe
Date: 11/29/2017 1:38:00 AM

Thank you for the correction. Now all of the words are properly placed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2017 2:51:00 PM

this is a lovely example you gave us of your form, Vermillion! i think your challenge form for us is descriptive and awesome.

Vermillion Scythe
Date: 11/27/2017 8:57:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words. I am also trying to invent new forms of poetry and Word Vision is my favorite one.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/25/2017 3:44:00 AM

Really enjoyed the feel in your write. All the best ... CayCay

Vermillion Scythe
Date: 11/25/2017 4:34:00 AM

Thank you.