Carmen Sunshine Poet Free verse

Spring

Spring;   my second least favorite season
Hay fever, runny nose and sneezing is my reason
The moment flowers begin to bloom 
Kicks off my discomfort and overall gloom
Everyone else sees the beauty of this season
I only see my body’s treacherous treason
Flowers bloom, sneeze, sneeze, sneeze 
Head so stuffy I can barely think, 
Morning dew, fresh cut grass, afternoon breeze 
Sneeze, sneeze, sneeze, they always come in threes.

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Teddy Kimathi June 9, 2016 at 9:01 AM Congrats Carmen, for your placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)

Jaycee Cervenka March 13, 2015 at 7:53 PM Oh yes, I understand this very well. The pollen gives me hives to go along with all of the others. Love the sun, but can't be out in it for long during this time of year. Carmen Sunshine March 16, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you !

Kim Merryman March 13, 2015 at 3:37 PM You poor thing! I know a lot of people in your shoes. You did an excellent job writing about Spring and your allergies. Sure hope you feel better soon. Love, Kim Carmen Sunshine March 16, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you ! its a yearly thing and now I'm use to it and am prepared..