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Spring

Amidst the budding branches the Robin sings, the song is carried tunefully in the spring air. denoting that all is well in his world Every sound listened to by all from tiny field mice scurrying looking for food. to the giant grazing cattle happily eating the young grass Hammy hedgehog listens, his little tongue is busy eating the cat food left out. Jewel like blades of wet grass hide the Koi carp swimming lazily in the garden ponds, enjoying the sun's warmth. Many beds of daffodils their perfume intermingle with the nearby tulips who stand tall, their many hues overcome your senses, the tiny snowdrops perfume infuse with the hyacinths as they all quietly make the colour and perfume of Spring. Raised temperatures, bring out the people to enjoy the sunshine to their bones, lifting their souls. Taking notes of what has survived the winter, unhappy when they find a favourite variety of plant wilted under the pressures of winter's Xtreme cold. Yes, spring means a smile to the face, a tear to ones eyes, zest to the soul. Penned 22 February 2015

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Date: 3/4/2015 4:57:00 PM
Great work and creative way of carrying out the contest's theme..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:35:00 PM
ahh, another one like me who used ZEST. I love that Z word! And I love your entire colorful poem, Seren. Hope life is treating you well . Congrats in the contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/2/2015 11:22:00 PM
Hi Andrea, yes zest is a lovely word puts a zing into a sentence. Damned if I could think of an x that fitted. Thx for your congrats...Seren
Date: 2/28/2015 2:36:00 AM
I enjoyed this stroll through spring Seren. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:23:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 5:05:00 PM
Nice imagery of Spring, Seren. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 2/27/2015 8:23:00 AM
your line "Xtreme cold" cost you valuable points. It is not a proper word sorry Seren congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:43:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:19:00 PM
Bring it on . . . I am ready to embrace the spring -- she is a beautiful lover!! 7
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:45:00 AM
Lovely abcedarian. Great imagery of spring. Must do well in the contest. :D Smiles. Kim
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Lovely. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/22/2015 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Ravi, for stopping by....Seren
Date: 2/22/2015 7:27:00 AM
so beautifully penned Seren - i love the clever way you did X:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/22/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Jan I did an oops had to edit, left out v... You didnt notice. Lol. Nor me .....Seren

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