Spring

Amidst the budding
branches the Robin sings, the song is
carried tunefully in the spring air.
denoting that all is well in his world
Every sound listened to by all
from tiny field mice scurrying looking for food. to the
giant grazing cattle happily eating the young grass
Hammy hedgehog listens, his little tongue
is busy eating the cat food left out.
Jewel like blades of wet grass hide the
Koi carp swimming
lazily in the garden ponds, enjoying the sun's warmth.
Many beds of daffodils their perfume intermingle with the
nearby tulips who stand tall, their many hues
overcome your senses, the tiny snowdrops
perfume infuse with the hyacinths as they all
quietly make the colour and  perfume of Spring.
Raised temperatures, bring out the people to enjoy the
sunshine  to their bones, lifting their souls.
Taking notes of what has  survived the winter,
unhappy when they find  a favourite 
variety of plant 
wilted under the pressures of winter's
Xtreme cold.
Yes, spring means a smile to the face, a tear to ones eyes,
zest to the soul.

Penned 22 February 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Great work and creative way of carrying out the contest's theme..Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:35 PM
ahh, another one like me who used ZEST. I love that Z word! And I love your entire colorful poem, Seren. Hope life is treating you well . Congrats in the contest.
Roberts Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Hi Andrea, yes zest is a lovely word puts a zing into a sentence. Damned if I could think of an x that fitted. Thx for your congrats...Seren
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 2:36 AM
I enjoyed this stroll through spring Seren. Congrats on your win!
A  Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Seren, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
Roper Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Nice imagery of Spring, Seren. Congrats on your win. Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 8:23 AM
your line "Xtreme cold" cost you valuable points. It is not a proper word sorry Seren congrats on placing hugs
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meade Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Bring it on . . . I am ready to embrace the spring -- she is a beautiful lover!! 7
Nunez Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Lovely abcedarian. Great imagery of spring. Must do well in the contest. :D Smiles. Kim
Sathasivam Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Lovely. Enjoyed. Tfs
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Ravi, for stopping by....Seren
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:27 AM
so beautifully penned Seren - i love the clever way you did X:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thanks Jan I did an oops had to edit, left out v... You didnt notice. Lol. Nor me .....Seren
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