Spring

SPRING


Testing the water with bare toes
I will recoil
to the misted edge of hoarfrost
softened soil
peek through eyes of Crocus
and Jonquil
at the emptiness my promise
must fullfil.

I’ll whisper to the branches shy
with cold
to remember seasoned stories
they were told
beckon to the passing birds -
alight
let us celebrate this
un-chilled night.

My warming fingers, reaching gently,
thaw river ice
as softened earth imparts my scent
to foggy spice
worms wiggle in the drizzling
April showers
as dawn tempts the stretching vines
climb empty bowers.

I will touch each aching heart
with sunshine’s gift
releasing all from stifling 
Winter’s grip
nestle with the Cardinals
and Jays
languish in renewals
warming haze.


1/2/2015
submitted to Seasons – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/7/2015 2:21:00 PM
Certainly reads like a winner. Well done with capturing so many great images.
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:24:00 PM
John, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 4:43:00 PM
G'day John... Your poem paints a picture of the changing seasons that lifts us up. Thanks John Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 1/11/2015 4:58:00 PM
Lindsay,thanks for stopping by, always nice to meet a new poet.
Date: 1/6/2015 8:33:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win. I will touch each aching heart... I love that last par. 7
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:42:00 PM
thank you Eve for the high praise and high marks
Date: 1/6/2015 2:30:00 AM
Wonderful! Congrats, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Estela for stopping by and reading this poem.
Date: 1/6/2015 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning beauty John!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:42:00 PM
Thank You Dr. Sharma.
Date: 1/5/2015 11:10:00 PM
I am amazed by how many really good poems I am seeing in this contest list. Congrats. Yours is really good. A FAVE.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:41:00 PM
I agree Andrea, as I read through the list and tried to comment on all I found myself repeating the word WOW...Really great response to this contest. Thanks for your support and comments. See you on Ground Hog Day
Date: 1/5/2015 9:16:00 PM
Pleasing images of the spring, congrats on the win, John
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Mehta
Date: 1/5/2015 7:52:00 PM
Just charming! You should try a Blitz poem? Congrad’s on your win. Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2015 9:39:00 PM
Hmmm, Debbie, I shall have to look into this blitz poem thing. Thanks for you support .
Date: 1/5/2015 3:25:00 PM
John, I ditto Debra's comments below and would like you to accept my huge congratulations on this winning piece! Your imagery is absolutely stunning and makes me want to hang on to Spring! Warmest regards always! Pandita.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Pandita, i have always wondered what the things around us think and feel.
Date: 1/5/2015 2:33:00 PM
Once again a winning write and I am not reffering to contest results, nicely done my friend. While I'm at it congratulations on your top win.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Maurice, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 1/5/2015 1:34:00 PM
Hi John, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. I love the way you made Spring speak to us as she reaches out to do her magic with her touch. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for reading and commenting
Date: 1/5/2015 12:06:00 PM
fresh as spring itself, john.. many congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Nette
Date: 1/5/2015 10:30:00 AM
Though this had a second place in the contest, for which I offer congratulations... I read it as a first place poem only. Your rhyme and rhythm as well as choice of wording is sublime. Your imagery is top notch... I'm in awe of such talent on display. Honored to have been allowed to read this... thank you for sharing.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Debra for your high praise of the poem. Thanks for reading and commenting
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/5/2015 10:32:00 AM
I favored this for easy access to read again and again. If I could give it more than a 7 I would.
Date: 1/5/2015 8:02:00 AM
lovely rendition of spring John congrats on win hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Shadow. I have often wondered how the things in nature feel and what they are thinking.
Date: 1/5/2015 7:47:00 AM
I love the personification and imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 1/5/2015 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan, it was a fun write.
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