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Spring


Did you hear my longing for a dress of green
during winter’s sleep, Oh, how long I dreamed!
Missing those coverings of my graceful limbs
and yes, too, the blossoms of fairy dust whims

Fancy meeting you, here, at my new birth revival
finding your muse within my greenings arrival
Warmer winds catching my new sprouting leaves
I’ll dance for your pleasure and hope you are pleased

Awakening roots draw from the earth living water
Watch where you step those that rise are a bother
Of my need for this dress there can be no denial
For oxygen spent from it will grant your survival

That scar that you carved on my truck just last year
has become the tattoo that reminds of your tears
When you feel you must trim my broken limbs
remember to raise thoughtfully my new dress’s hem

 © …….. 2015/01/03

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/23/2015 4:05:00 PM
Hi Debra, I just found your poem featured this week on the Home Page! Congratulations to you! I was nice to read it again since you placed in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:25:00 PM
Debra,, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 AM
Debra.. Your pen is a splendid brush painting an attractive scene that brings delight. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 9:47:00 PM
Debra this one could have been entitled Spring's Tailor. Well done, congrats on your placement.
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:00:00 AM
Lovely images on spring Debra! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations.. :)!I re-echo my comments.. :)!
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:09:00 AM
Wow Debra, This poem deserves to be at the top...big congrats on your win. I am fav'ing this lovely work of art!
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Date: 1/5/2015 9:19:00 PM
Nice write on spring, congrats on he win, Debra
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:45:00 PM
Strange, how humans don more clothes in winter and trees get stripped down bare. Makes one shiver at just the thought of it. Don't be surprised if you hear the tree say thank you come Spring for your lovely compassionate poem in its honor. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/5/2015 2:11:00 PM
What a beautiful painting you crafted. Congratulations on your win with this exquisite piece.
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:47:00 PM
how lovely that you made it the gown of spring and using the tree and its limbs! Great personification. I do not know the place this one got, but it's tops with me. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:47:00 PM
And wow, you are someone that did May pole? I only read about it but I don't think anyone in the states ever did it.
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:56:00 PM
I was 13 that year...in a small town. It was part of the festivities for homecoming that year. It was wrapping the May pole... with colorful ribbons... every other one going round the pole in opposite direction ... one time you ducked under the next the other one ducked under. Quite fun as I recall... and colorful too.
Date: 1/5/2015 1:31:00 PM
Hi Debra, your poem about Spring's arrival is so lovely. You made Spring talk to us so sweetly! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:20:00 PM
Debra, this is such an outstanding, lovely personification of Spring! I'm not surprised that it is a winner! Congratulations, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita.
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:08:00 PM
this is amazing, debra... many congrats!
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Date: 1/5/2015 8:12:00 AM
beautifully penned Debra congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/5/2015 7:50:00 AM
beautiful spring write brilliant personifcation:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:46:00 AM
Great one about spring's arrival..It was very sublime and cohesively written..Sara
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:06:00 AM
- I am looking out of my window, ice and snow ... cold ..... - I wish spring was here - Another beautiful poem dear Debra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:37:00 AM
beautiful poem.. we have same fave spring.. :)! i esp love the first stanza.. :)! wow! GOd bless you always.. :P)
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:38:00 AM
A nice little poem, Debra. I enjoyed the read! And thank you for all your very generous comments on my poetry! Your friend, john. :)
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