Spring

Did you hear my longing for a dress of green
during winter’s sleep, Oh, how long I dreamed!
Missing those coverings of my graceful limbs
and yes, too, the blossoms of fairy dust whims

Fancy meeting you, here, at my new birth revival
finding your muse within my greenings arrival
Warmer winds catching my new sprouting leaves
I’ll dance for your pleasure and hope you are pleased

Awakening roots draw from the earth living water
Watch where you step those that rise are a bother
Of my need for this dress there can be no denial
For oxygen spent from it will grant your survival

That scar that you carved on my truck just last year
has become the tattoo that reminds of your tears
When you feel you must trim my broken limbs
remember to raise thoughtfully my new dress’s hem

 © …….. 2015/01/03
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Hi Debra, I just found your poem featured this week on the Home Page! Congratulations to you! I was nice to read it again since you placed in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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January 11, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Debra,, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
Lawless Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Debra this one could have been entitled Spring's Tailor. Well done, congrats on your placement.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Lovely images on spring Debra! Congrats on ur win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Congratulations.. :)!I re-echo my comments.. :)!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Wow Debra, This poem deserves to be at the top...big congrats on your win. I am fav'ing this lovely work of art!
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Nice write on spring, congrats on he win, Debra
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Strange, how humans don more clothes in winter and trees get stripped down bare. Makes one shiver at just the thought of it. Don't be surprised if you hear the tree say thank you come Spring for your lovely compassionate poem in its honor. Peace. :)
Yvonne Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 2:11 PM
What a beautiful painting you crafted. Congratulations on your win with this exquisite piece.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:47 PM
how lovely that you made it the gown of spring and using the tree and its limbs! Great personification. I do not know the place this one got, but it's tops with me. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:47 PM
And wow, you are someone that did May pole? I only read about it but I don't think anyone in the states ever did it.
Squyres Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:56 PM
I was 13 that year...in a small town. It was part of the festivities for homecoming that year. It was wrapping the May pole... with colorful ribbons... every other one going round the pole in opposite direction ... one time you ducked under the next the other one ducked under. Quite fun as I recall... and colorful too.
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Hi Debra, your poem about Spring's arrival is so lovely. You made Spring talk to us so sweetly! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Sietesantos Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Debra, this is such an outstanding, lovely personification of Spring! I'm not surprised that it is a winner! Congratulations, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita.
Onclaud Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:08 PM
this is amazing, debra... many congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:12 AM
beautifully penned Debra congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:50 AM
beautiful spring write brilliant personifcation:-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Great one about spring's arrival..It was very sublime and cohesively written..Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 7:06 AM
- I am looking out of my window, ice and snow ... cold ..... - I wish spring was here - Another beautiful poem dear Debra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 6:37 AM
beautiful poem.. we have same fave spring.. :)! i esp love the first stanza.. :)! wow! GOd bless you always.. :P)
Fleming Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 1:38 AM
A nice little poem, Debra. I enjoyed the read! And thank you for all your very generous comments on my poetry! Your friend, john. :)
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